by firstkiss
That was the sound I made when I found you'd updated :D
Excellent gradual development of the characters. Just fabulous. Well done! I avidly await your next one!
Zera x
I love this story line. It's got drama, intrigue, sex, heat, tenderness and even a little cuteness. Fantastic job.
Your writing is superior to most. This story works on several levels and I look forward to the next chapter.
I've been impatiently waiting for this chapter, now more impatience as I wait for the next! :)
I keep checking everyday to see if you have updated and when I saw that you did I actually screamed! I know, how pathetic! I keep loving this story even more with every new chapter! Now I will wait for the next one.
What a fantastic story!! thanks for sharing your wonderful ideas with all of us! Looking forward to more...best luck in all you do!
Nice story, good grammer, puncuation and composition. It's good to see a story here that is not degrading to the man or the woman. Keep up the good work.
GS
i can't wait for the next chapter i love the pull and push of there relationship
I love your stories so much I added you to my favorite authors. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't make me wait too long =O
I've been patiently waiting. Please give us more. Lots more and soon.
please keep this story going, its the bes that i've read in a while.. good luck!
This story is fabulous! The plot is great and the character development is compelling- I can hardly wait to see how you end it!
You have an excellent story going here, with two fascinating characters. Please carry on.
....your dear old fans who LOVE this story? Pls tell us there's an update about to happen this week? It's been tooooo long and while we enjoy the other stories, it's this one we want to read!!!
I have become addicted to all of your stories, but I admit a soft spot for this one. I would really love to see this story play out and get to know more about Daniel. As always your characters are so crisp and refreshingly real, but also intoxicatingly sensual. Can't wait for more of this tale.
Can we expect another chapter any time soon? I just re-read the whole thing, although it hasn't been long from the first time i read it. your other WIPs are good, but this one's the hottest!
I adore this story- as the person below me said every single one of your stories is hot but there is something about this one. I hope you continue to expand on that as I'd really like to know what happens between your two characters.
Youre work seems so similar to that of e.l. James in the book series fifty shades of grey. Im beginning to think you are her.
Ah this was great, I love how you describe the characters and the detail of everything like her work desk, the breakfast coffee, etc. I have my own picture of Daniel in my head ( he is someone I have only met once and is about 30 years older than me, I am 18) I am hoping to see him again next year. This story is captivating to me more because i have a fantasy thing for older men. I guess I should do my schoolwork now(I've put it off whilst reading this) and then read the final five chapters!
...corny beyond belief.
"City Hall could care less about what Bruch says, especially if he's our man,"
Could care less is the opposite of couldn't care less. Does the author know the difference? Or, does she want to have the reader perceive her interlocutor to be an uneducated boor?
That reminds me of this author´s confusion between complement and compliment on an earlier story.
gotta go.