by firstkiss
The chemistry between Daniel and Clara is off the charts. <br><br>
Say yes Clara!
Disclaimers need to be posted! You melted my monitor with this chapter.
Again I am amazed at your work... only thing is now I have yet again to wait for the next installment... :( I swear I check back daily just to see if there's another post. Amazing, loved it, and all other phrases that fit that discription.
Though the sex was hot and well written, I wanted more of the story and less of the sex because I've fallen in love with these characters. And now I have to pout and wait for the rest.
love clara and daniel. can't wait for next chpt. This time, can we actually get the slow, passion and emotion-filled love scene? I feel like we always get the quickies, but really want to see these two, esp. Daniel, "make love." 0and after his propsoal, perfect timing, yes?
keep up the great story!
no matter what your fans say. FK this is a great story and I'm glad to see you're back at it. Remember what one editor told me once, always leave them wanting more and you'll have fans for life. I love your work, your characters are so very real, I could feel her frustration over the mouse thing. Keep writing and we'll be coming to see you at book signings someday.
Another amazing chapter. I'm so happt you are continuing to write this story. This was hot and sensual. I can't wait for the next chapter.
AMAZING!!!!!!!! no other word to descbribe it. but i want a HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!! it will be, right?????please!!!!!!!! happy! ending! happy! ending! xxx
I check back often for new submissions as well. This was wonderful. You are very talented and worth waiting for!
now i really can't wait to read the next chapter this was sooo good
your stories definitely are among the best on literotica! are you ever going to finish you story about adam? the last chapter ended with such a cliffhanger!
Would really love to see more about Adam (Not my Type)
Clara better say yes! Gets me mad how stubborn she is! Why would she try to resist Daniel! What's wrong with her! Love it! Can't wait for ch. 10!
This chapter was just flat out beautiful---gorgeous. The drama of Maddock-ville is gone and so this is not as intense
in that way, but the transitional space allows them to figure out they need each other. The conclusion is not surprising but amazing. That is due to the writer's masterful writing.
This had my heart thumping. Clara is now the girl of my dreams. She is a doll and a real woman!! lol
Haha, honestly wasn't expecting him to ask that. That was an awesome way to end a chapter.