All Comments on 'I Thought I Hated Him Ch. 09'

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NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Fabulous!

The chemistry between Daniel and Clara is off the charts. <br><br>

Say yes Clara!

michchick98michchick98over 16 years ago
Extreme Heat

Disclaimers need to be posted! You melted my monitor with this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Why'd it end there?...

Again I am amazed at your work... only thing is now I have yet again to wait for the next installment... :( I swear I check back daily just to see if there's another post. Amazing, loved it, and all other phrases that fit that discription.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too much sex, little story

Though the sex was hot and well written, I wanted more of the story and less of the sex because I've fallen in love with these characters. And now I have to pout and wait for the rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
love this story

love clara and daniel. can't wait for next chpt. This time, can we actually get the slow, passion and emotion-filled love scene? I feel like we always get the quickies, but really want to see these two, esp. Daniel, "make love." 0and after his propsoal, perfect timing, yes?

keep up the great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Beautiful way to end it

no matter what your fans say. FK this is a great story and I'm glad to see you're back at it. Remember what one editor told me once, always leave them wanting more and you'll have fans for life. I love your work, your characters are so very real, I could feel her frustration over the mouse thing. Keep writing and we'll be coming to see you at book signings someday.

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 16 years ago
Smokin'!

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Fab

I check everyday for a submission, they're worth the wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wow!

Another amazing chapter. I'm so happt you are continuing to write this story. This was hot and sensual. I can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
wwwwaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!

AMAZING!!!!!!!! no other word to descbribe it. but i want a HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!! it will be, right?????please!!!!!!!! happy! ending! happy! ending! xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Amazing!

I check back often for new submissions as well. This was wonderful. You are very talented and worth waiting for!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hottt!!!

now i really can't wait to read the next chapter this was sooo good

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i love your stories!

your stories definitely are among the best on literotica! are you ever going to finish you story about adam? the last chapter ended with such a cliffhanger!

NorCalGirlNorCalGirlover 16 years ago
Yep, yep - what the person before me said

Would really love to see more about Adam (Not my Type)

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please!

Clara better say yes! Gets me mad how stubborn she is! Why would she try to resist Daniel! What's wrong with her! Love it! Can't wait for ch. 10!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 16 years ago
So Hot!

You write the hottest sex scenes OMG!

Dancewithme2Dancewithme2over 15 years ago
Endearing

This chapter was just flat out beautiful---gorgeous. The drama of Maddock-ville is gone and so this is not as intense

in that way, but the transitional space allows them to figure out they need each other. The conclusion is not surprising but amazing. That is due to the writer's masterful writing.

This had my heart thumping. Clara is now the girl of my dreams. She is a doll and a real woman!! lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

and thank you both for your story ^^~ firstkiss and Diatikan

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Haha, honestly wasn't expecting him to ask that. That was an awesome way to end a chapter.

secretdesires69secretdesires69over 11 years ago
Great!

Wonderful! Definitely re-readable!

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