by Yesarub
i love the sequel, the plot keeps grtting better and better. keep up the great work
whoreslut in waiting maddy my girl.hubby need too move on.
I have thoroughly enjoyed the seductive nature of your story! This chapter was exquisite. You have really developed DEPTH into your characters. I have truly enjoyed watching Madeline's transformation (and corruption) by her "friend". My hope is that this continues with her conscience being tortured when she's away from "girls night", but now helplessly addicted to it. I think Shelly can corrupt her further to finally get what she wants. I've enjoyed this SO much, my hope is that the end of the story isn't quite in sight yet. ;0) Thank you for sharing!
Loving this story, really keen to see what Shellys ultimate plan is and how she'll use this to play Scott and Maddy against each other. Can't wait for the next chapter
You know who's really getting fucked in this story? Scott and Madeline's children. I wonder which of the two assholes will have knocked Madeline up? And who will get custody of the older kids? As usual, the most innocent get the harshest treatment.
What is fun or entertaining about causing suffering and loss?
Kiks02-Thank you!
Anon 5/22-Right? She's really starting to bloom in a way I hadn't originally expected!
Vickitvohio-Aww, shucks! Thank you!! I have a few more chapters laid out, but I confess, I write these stories one at a time. I don't have some far-reaching plot in mind. I'll be surprised at where this ends up as much as you!!
Anon 5/23-Thanks! I'm looking forward to seeing what Shelly's master plan is, too!
Anon 5/24-I appreciate your feedback, although I think you might want to block my stories or avoid reading them. I'm clearly not your cup of tea, and I think my writing is just bumming you out. Life is short! Don't read authors you hate!! And even though shitty things sometimes happen to innocent people, I promise, I'm going to try real hard to protect the kid and keep him unscathed from all of this.
Chapter 9 was submitted on Friday, 5/24. It takes a couple days for moderators to review and approve them, and this one might take longer because of the holiday weekend.
I'm writing Chapter 10 now. The holiday weekend put my writing a little behind, too, but the tenth chapter is nearly complete. I'm trying to get in at least one chapter a week!