by Lost Boy
Wild from the start . Here's one from one of the best Writers on here .Thank you for another great story. 5 Star. Must read story .
The story was very interesting however your language and sentence syntax leaves a lot to be desired. Proofread everything you write and think to ensure the correct point is conveyed.
I don't mean to be crude, and I hope you will take this as a compliment. I was "prepared", and yet I still had to clean up after a particularly erotic scene in this story. The parts that simply fill in plot are extremely interesting, and the story as a whole had me trapped until I was finished. It was as if Nenya had captured me through the internet.
Amazing work! 5 stars!
which makes her a man-slut, which, as we know, does not require her to be bitten by anything: she is simply a nymphomaniac
I am thrilled at how well this story is doing. Some health issues forced a bit of a rushed ending and lack of proof reading. I am bopping between the next Sisterhood story and Hello Mr. Robinson as well as a few short stories. So many ideas so little time. I had no idea 'were' stood for man, though i was more focused on an odd version of lycanthrope, thank you for the correction! Keep commenting and voting and if you have any suggestions please drop me a line. I love hearing from you guys.
With nods to the original wolfman (Talbot family) and Underworld (Corvinus = Raven), and throwing in some Lovecraftian stuff at the end, rather than a Hellene Titan referred to more than once.
Well written, and while the MC embraces her affliction, she also isn't very likeable.
Thanks for sharing. 4* Slainté
Lost Boy, this is a great story! I saw you said that you rushed the end, and that led to a lack of proof reading, and unfortunately that was apparent in my read through... I would love to see this done again having been edited, as well as other stories for world building!
Great Story, just needed a little more time!
Again I stopped to read your material. As always its some of the best. Keep up the good work.
and moved off in a very different direction to what I expected.
A very good read.
I left four stars instead of the usual five I give your work because the proofreading was not up to your usual efforts and took me out of the story somewhat. Also, have you considered a list of characters or an FAQ. There are times I run across a familiar name and wrack my brain trying to piece it with another of your stories.