All Comments on 'I Was Bored Ch. 07'

will this never end. Good at the beginning, now repetitious.

When I sit down and think about this story, I find myself enjoying the erotic flavor of it. This isn't a cheating wife story, nor a bdsm story. It's really an innovative story, combining domination with willing submission, and without the violence and egotistical humiliation, with fulfilling some sexual fantasies. The characters are developed enough for their roles and care for each other.

So what if some of the characters react similarily? They're representing fairly decent guys, despite their adultry, not the uncaring jerks that so often populate stories here.

If this isn't your preferred kind of story, start writing your own stories.

as far as i am concerned this can go on for a long time. i am enjoying these characters and want to hear about the trip to dallas...keep going and those that are "bored" dont read chap8,9,10....

It looks like all the neighborhood ladies are now call girls/hookers.

But you can't call them nasty sluts, because they are such nice girls, and they are all just doing it for their husbands to make them hot for them because they are all whores.. Bullfeathers, and horsehockey.

those that are bored can stop reading. let the rest of us enjoy keep going.

All the women act just the same. All the men act just the same. All the outside guys act just the same. All the people in the story act just the same. When all the characters in a story act just the same it becomes boring. Doing anything just the same becomes boring. Because it's all just the same.

Maybe a wife could change her mind. Maybe a husband could say "Take the slut lessons if you want but when you come home I expect you to do it all for me." Some personal conflict makes for a better story. Or at least one that's not all just the same.

(Harddaysknight: If you remove this review will you let me know why?)

LAURA IN LOVE WITH BOB AND SUE IS HURT.SHE WILL LOSE HIM IF SOMETHING ISN'T DONE.GIVE US SOME THING NEW TO WORK WITH.KEEP THE STORIES COMING.IT TAKES TO LONG FOR THE STORIES,LOVE YOUR WORK.

LAURA IS IN LOVE WITH BOB AND SUE JEALOUS. GIVE A ENDING.

This chapter was boring. Overall, it was a good story. It would have been a much better story if the women were 20 years younger since they were used for business. At their ages that was illogical. Men will pay up to $2,500 for a night with a beautiful teenager. A forty year old women would be turned down at $50.

i have come back to read your story for the third time would like io see more stories, i think gary and stans wives should become bobs sluts

Mate it would be great it you continued this one. Perhaps Charlie could get out of hand with Sue to spice it up more. You're the writer though. Well done. Almost makes one believe something like that is possible...

laura is all bob and this could get to be a lot of fun watching charlie go crazy.watching sue handle laura with bob.i know you hear us yes or no .

I loved it my husband to be will love the idea to will definitely share it with him

Hey Bob i take my Hat to you and sue and laura and ellen

keep up the good work.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

I can't be too objective since this is my favorite kind of

eroticism , and I start out fully engaged after just a few paragraphs . My comments may not be valid because of that , but here's why I loved this story . Husband and wife filling out the terms of an illicit contract , allowing each to have a free reign with their desires with other lovers . The story came full-circle , twisting away from the norm by using the master-slave pathway , and the master always being the neighbor , not the spouse . This kept interest flowing throughout the full set of chapters , in a way , to see how many wives would join , how many husbands would participate . I think leaving it at this point is fine , We are left to anticipate , in our own minds , the meetings with the other wives , and their husbands . An excellent , and sexy story . Thanks !!

Great story, and i LOVED it. This is my favorite kind of story -- wife as sub, but only giving in to her real desires. I do agree with some of the comments that some extra conflict, particularly around Charlie and Laura would be good...but you are a very good writer. Thanks!

I read the other positive comments and agree with them. Great story!

Only problem, Sue never blew him or had him in her ass. I really didn't like the fact that he put up with the prohibition that she couldn't do that with her husband.

What a refreshing story; from cuckold to master, from boring sex to sexual bliss. It was fun to read!

Highly inventive, well written and amusing story.

Thanks

I just ran across one of your stories and since i was bored i would try this one out. At first it was a bit tough to read, but i went back and re read threw it again. I'm surprised you have not put in another chapter to this series. It was just getting pretty good. I would say well laid, but that is a given! Keep it up, hope to see more!EC18

I hope this is the end of this disgusting series of atypical stories by HDK. Hard to believe a fine writer like HDK wrote this pile of garbage

60 year old George

Just skimmed this on a re read, just as bad as when I read it the first time. I look forward to reading your efforts, but this one was a total bust.

I read a lot of negative comments about this story. I Just read this for the third time and LOVE IT! Everyone is entittled to their opinion but in this humble authors opinion this is one of the best I've read.

So i was a little hesitant to read this story, the title didn't give way to some hard hitting ones. BUT!!!! never judge a book..er nice story by its cover. This was not just a sex story..its about life, to me its the best part about reading literotica as far as im concerned. Women, once they come out of their shell will love sex and all its non constrants as men to, and more so to be exact. They all have the slut mentality or want, they just need a reason, an opening, a chance, and a man who is good at what he does to bring all this out into the opening. I have no idea weather this is a true story or not. What i do know is, its not without the realm of possibilities. I wish you would continue on with this story, yes i liked it that much. I jacked off three times thinking about your wife, and ellen. Laura was just the icing on the cake as far as i am concerned. I am going to do try this with my much younger gf..who needs a good into into a great sex life. Being a young mother and caretaker to a slob of a dad who hates life and won't let anybody enjoy what it has to offer. He has kept her needs at bay for years....and by god im going to show her how good sex, fucking can be. So you just persuaded me more to go for it rather than not..so thank you for a wonderful story, I LOVED IT

Why do you have to write this? Is it really you? What a shame!

I've never smiled so big after reading a story on Literotica. This series has just been fantastic, but I think we all want more.

What an amazing series! WOW!!!!!!

I didn't comment through the early chapters because I was too busy running to the next one and then to the next.

I lost my count of how many times I came, so I just want to thank you very much for a beautiful writing, making it so livable, it made me want to find my way to live it.

THANK YOU!!!

Enough detail to hold me for seven chapters, but concise enough to where I was not bored. Couldn't count how many times I spilled my seed during the series. As far as I'm concerned you can add another 7 chapters.

Now its time for him to take charge of the cuckolded husbands and teach them how to serve him!

... and just what in the hell did you do with Harddaysknight? A top ten on the stink meter, for sure.

It strikes me that the premise of this story is so different from any thing else that I have found here or elsewhere. Congratulations.

...because you have not posted anything new recently, so I have just read this series for the third time. Thank you.

Maybe next time.

Sorry, should have known youd pull it out. Please forgive. Now continue. Wink.

Really enjoyed the way this story grew...expanded...came together. It is too bad you have not continued it. As always...like your writing!

thank you! sexcellent!

It seems to me that there should be one more chapter, describing the return trip to Stan and Gary with Ellen, Laura and Sue. Maybe involving Stan's and Gary's wives?

My hope is someone you know figures out you wrote this and punches your fag wimp cuck ass right in the throat.... What a horrible piece from someone who used to be better than this Euro fag garbage........

My wife pointed me in this direction, brilliant read

... the last time was 18 months ago. I enjoy it as much every time. I think that it is the best story that I have found on Literotica, even better than "Lady in Red". Thank you HDK.

At first this seemed a little disgusting. But, you are the master; and this became a sweet and sexy romp! Thank you,!

The worst story you ever wrote. I can't believe HDK wrote this or put his name on it.

I have just reread it again, even though I know what happens because I have read it so often. In my opinion it is the best story that I have found on this site.

I do think that you should have written at least one more chapter, this one ended with hints about another trip.

Where is the emotion?

HDK, I know it’s been 14 years since you posted this series but please consider adding some more to it as it was a fantastic story line. We need to read about all 3 sluts working together with a group of neighbor males. All the wives would cum to enjoy it. Thank you

Given your penchant for humor, irony and satire, what I read appears to be a cuck story reimagined. He's loved by women, respected by men! He's the man, a real stud!. No wimps here. LMFAO Good Job. Peace

Just an awful story. Not a likable person to be found - anywhere. They have the smarts of a squirrel. I can't believe HDK actually wrote this crap.

Wonderful story. I got worried at some point earlier in the series about how it was heading, but it came out perfectly. Absofuckinglutely perfect.

Kind of scary too. My wife and I make up sexy stories for each other as we make love. A few years ago I toyed with the idea of making up a story that included her with someone else, but never did. I may try it at some point.

I think anyone into the hotwive sccene would truly enjoy this.

Great story, it seemed to me to warrant at least one more chapter though. I thought it left a lot on the table that made me want more. Perhaps consider dusting this off and including one more "reunion" chapter. Thanks for your work

Well, I just binge read all seven chapters, and it was fun! Kudos for a great story. All told, you got 45 stars from me. Thanks Hardday! ~~ JB Edwards

Thank you.

Shitty, the whole series. 1 star per chapter.

This story is a tool for identifying the mentally damaged - they are the ones who think it's interesting.1

Terrible - from an author I generally like

Decent enough story but desperately in need of a proof reader. Confused with the names….. Jack became Jerry, Art became Steve then the reverse. Also, where is the ending? After such a long story I would have thought a final chapter bringing Sue and Charlie back????

Well, reading the comments finally clicked in my brain. Satire and humor for sure. Loving wives category? Hardly. Bob is able to pimp Sue, Ellen, and Laura and everything is hunky dory with it all. The wives get fucked before telling their husbands and their husbands get all the sex they want afterwards? Sounds like Bob is getting set for life with all of those contracts. Satire? I get it now.

I absolutely loathed this ‘story’, in fact I stopped reading it part way through chapter 2. Bob is a totally loathsome asshole, who deserves whatever bad things happen to him.

I am sorry but your words: “and entered her cervix” is bullshit, it’s physically impossible for a cock to enter a cervix.

Dumbest story I have ever read

I've lost all respect for Harddaysknight. With this series, you have discredited yourself in my eyes.

A fun bit of fantasy!

Cringe-worthy subject matter but you pulled it through! Well done!

I loved the series! Very hot sex scenes. I have experienced relationships something like this story so I can relate. I gave a few 4* ratings because of editing misses but mostly 5*.

I was bored, too.