All Comments on 'I Will Love You Forever Pt. 2 Ch. 10'

Poor Jacob. He did'nt deserve for his life to end this way. If there is any shread of justice I hope the Warden and Ty get theirs. Becca may have learn her lesson too late. Ty just plain loco.

excellent chapter as always

I hope that Kenji is not making a mistake that he and Patricia will regret.

I can not wait for Ty to get his i am glad that Becca got away from him. looking forward to next chapter

You are killing me, I love your story.

Thanks again I love Ur stories can't wait till the nxt chap ^^

Shame about Jacob. Glad Becca is finally understanding the gravity of her actions and is coming to terms. Ty hopefully will be handled soon. Kenji and Joel are doing the right thing, but at what possible cost?

I am intrigued by Saul, will he follow through with his unspoken promise?

Warden Ellis needs to be on the other side of the bars too.

Thank you,

M1

Glad to see there was an update, and I realized I had missed reading the previous chapter, so that was doubly nice. Just wanted to point out that You changed Noah Jackson to Jonah Jackson. Speaking of I'm very intrigued with Isadora's history.

Great chapter. I always thought history was boring, but this series has made it exciting for me. Great job, Kala.

will say it again..............you are simply the best!

I have loved this from the first sentence. I do hope that there will be more as I want to see these characters have their happily ever after.

As always...

I love your other stories, but this is the first of yours that I began reading so I've missed them. Thank you for the update. One suggestion? Be more descriptive of your characters. What does Lenny look like? Is Bella round and short with short wiry hair? Is Will long and lean or short and stocky? I'm not a writer and certainly not gifted, but I like appearances I guess. Anyway, you're awesome and thank you!!

update of one of my favorite writers. Keep us on our toes.

Again, I check the site everyday to see if you've updated! Keep up the excellent work! You are a fabulous author and I can't wait to buy all of your stories!

Your writing has always been great and just keeps getting better.

Not to sound harsh but I was starting to give up on waiting for another chapter. Really should focus on one story at a time.

And I think you're giving yourself extra work by putting in historical facts(?) that have little or no relevance to the story. I used to read them but now I just skip them since it's not really part of your storyline.

Other than that, I again enjoyed the story even though it wasn't really much literotica.

R1

First, thank you reading and for taking the time to comment. Secondly, my mind does not allow me to do one story at a time. I have tried and it just doesn't work for me. I Have already started on the next chapter. I also think that I submit on s regulsr basis. It isn't months between submissions. Lastly, I don't view the historical facts as extra work or not as a part of yhe story. They are entering the Civil rights era and the historical facts coincide

Twith that. I also happen to love history.

Forgive any missspellings I am doing this from my phone. Thank you to you and everyone else who reads my stories

Kal

I don't mind the wait kal gives me something to look forward too also how long will it be before part one is published and where will we be able to get it from

Im a big fan of your work. I wanted to go back and read "I will love you forever" from the beginning. The first part of your story has disappeared from the site. What happened?

You are one of the most prolific and consistent writers on this site - and I appreciate it. There is almost always something to read from one or the other of your stories and I have absolutely no complaints. Also, and while I understand we each have different tastes, I happen to like the variety of stories you have going at once. Please keep sharing your excellent storytelling with us.

It is an interesting story and I especially enjoy the history lessons. I was alive during many of those years but memory fades with time.