All Comments on 'I Will Love You Forever Pt. 2 Ch. 18'

another spectacular chapter of my favorite story I cannot wait for the next chapter

Mai is really really getting on my nerves. I feel sympathy for her situation but her bad decisions are seriously eroding it. Shit happens to everybody in diverse ways but we don't all choose to become horrible, conniving.... Words fail me. She needs a major attitude adjustment.

I'm glad John is ok. Even though it's not realistic, please don't kill off anymore of the g☺☺d guys. Ralph dying was enough. Can we have the next chapter up in like a couple of days? Pretty please...=))º°˚˚˚°ºнaĦaнaº°˚˚˚°º‎​=))

~Hypechic~

I really hate Mai, Kenji doesn't want you and he never will. It's like 7-up Kenji's feelings for Mai, never had never will!! The woman is psychotic with narcissistic tendencies. Could make Mai the victim of a hate crime? No one would miss her not even her father. HEll I doubt if her father loves her. Great chapter!!

Always being chased and pursued by someone, male or female Lololol.

I'm wondering if Harry isn't part of the origins of the Panther group but I guess the time is too early for that. This story is still in the 50's right?

Anyway, give us more insight to who's holding Shotaro's heart. I'm thinking its a sister.

As always, thank you for freely sharing your gifts with us!!

Urgh... Mai is nerve racking. Kenji don't won't her and still she persist. That heffa is trouble.

tsk tsk mai is so pitiful i hope that she and shotaro have happiness

She is persistent isn't she? LOL...I see no point in anyone getting riled up by her. It's obvious that the author has made the point to show that Kenji and Patty are devoted to each other, so we don't even get a good kind of tricky situation that Patty could walk in on. So, it seems a little moot for this character to try and do anything. I believe it's just another character that we get introduced to, and see her evolution good or bad. Let's face it Kenji and Patty are like the weirdly perfect couple and never get mad at each other, so this outside force ain't gonna make that happen. Anyhoo, sidenote: little Marie is going to give that family some serious grief, and surprisingly if this story goes that far..I can't wait.

So I'm the only one that's Team Mai? Ok, let me explain: I don't want her to come between Kenji and Patricia, I just want her to have the freedom she really wants. Mai as a character is exploding with deep development potential. An Asian woman who struggles to become self realized in this time period? I have to say this chapter got me hooked on her. She's a powerful woman trapped by severe racism and sexism. I hope we see her evolve into someone great. :)

As I read, and get a feel that things are settling down, you bring it again, and again! Great installment Kal. I can't wait for the next one...

That's how it is though. A person doesn't have to do anything to make someone obsessive. Great installment as always.

You have Warden Ellis in the early 1950's as a republican. Just to point out a minor historical point, most of the Southern white racists in the 1950's were democrats not republicans and most Southern blacks who were able to register to vote were republicans (though among northern blacks who had benefited more from FDR's policies things were more mixed). The change in southern voter registration and voting patterns only started in the 1960's, mostly in the 1964 election. Just look at the 1952 and 1956 presidential election maps and compare it to the 1968 and 1972 maps. Otherwise, love the story and the way you handle societal attitudes in the 40's and 50's.

I noted the error in the next chapter...Thanks

I don't like Mai but I feel sorry for her and the situation she's in. But she needs to find her somebody else. BTW Kal I love all your stories. I was kinda lost reading this story at first. But I was wondering were can I find part 1??