All Comments on 'I Win the Lottery'

by sammbeltt

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Clancy31015Clancy31015over 5 years ago
What's next?

This story has the potential to expanded into a full length story, like SteveWallace's stories, Prolonged_Debut10, BigZeke13, or Nicequip. So, what's next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
great story!

I love the story and definitely wouldn't mind seeing a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
He became their punk

Okay, the main character need to man up! He’s know he is being used by his own family!

What happened if the money is all gone?! Would they still respect him? You should make a new chapter with him being worried that he is running out and is putting his foot down.

Have him invest his money and start his own business which will make him a millionaire!

ManoBlueManoBlueover 5 years ago
Weak willed

You have some good writing skills but your male characters are lames.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Confused

You said he was staying in aunt's room but then said she would go to his room. I also did not know you could put a sunroof in a convertible. Dude is a pushover. Need to man him up and get videos

Storyteller0112Storyteller0112over 5 years ago
Awfully High Priced Pussy

Family aside, that is some very expensive sex.

toy4LadyandDontoy4LadyandDonover 5 years ago
Becoming the family wimp

He needs to put his foot down and invest the money before he's broke with no pussy to fuck

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WOW

a story about a WIMP who was a truly selfish creep. the women should have drowned the idiot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
New hope

I hope this is a set up for him to take over as man of the house he needs to man up before he runs out of everything money and pussy they already don’t like him and see him as nothing more then a check and if he does loose everything it would be ok he’s a stupid idiot so it would serve him right

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
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Guy is getting played by all the hoes hes going to go broke.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Same old lotto winner story

Every relative expects to be cut in on the swag.

While a bit of an exaggeration, women do tend to gravitate toward men who can afford their financial desires. Our hero in this tale is never going to wise up and tell these greedy hogs "NO!". The mom and sister already know how to get what they want, and the other family females are lining up for their turn. With half of his winnings going to taxes before he even gets to spend a single dollar, just the purchases of this story have already reached several hundred thousands of dollars. The harpies will spend every dime he's got, and the sex will stop the moment he's broke, And they will blame him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wow....sounds like a plan....thanks!

Great news. I recently won the lottery...over $150 million. I don't have many female relatives, but the street that I live on has many single young women, middle aged women. There are also some married younger and older women. I will offer to pay off their bills in return for some one on one time with them. If there are any female reading this please feel free to contact me. I would gladly pay off your bills. I don't care if you are a bit chubby....so long as you don't smell bad. We can have alot of fun together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Im youy bbggest fan dude... I jerk off to your stories regularly

Love your work...nice to see youre still active. Hoping to read more.of your work.

Nobody does harem incest manipulation mixed with non consent like you do. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not what I would Do

I would buy Me a Ranch in Nevada .. The Ladies that work there would be a Lot better investment ... That is what I would do ..

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Part 2. Money over. The boy started to learn at college or became homeless. It is up to author...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really hope theres a sequel soon.

I know people may say theyve read this before but nobody does reluctant big sister and mother like you.

I love how your stories dont make "feelings" the reason for sex but desire. The control it gives to both the women and the man feels so hot knowing the lsdies would rather do anything else.

Hope this gets a part 2 with less new characters and more reluctant sister or cousin harem sex, or maybe aunt mom combo....the possibilities are endless.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Aaaaaaaand the money is gone

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

At the rate he's going he's going to blow through that 30 million real quick.

dikupinyadikupinyaabout 5 years ago
i like it

please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good diggers.

Stupid boy should have fucked mom and sister then left the gold digging slits with all there debts unpaid

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
YOU ARE MY FAVOURITE WRITER HERE!

My hand and my body is waiting for a sequel. This has been part of my jerk off material for months ever since it released. No other story in this site like it hope you do more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I gotta agree...I know this is fiction, BUT, your boy is gonna be "broke", and more than just financially, if he does not slow down!!

IF you write a sequel, he has to "man up" and take COMPLETE CONGROL of the money and family situation (not PLURAL-they are tied together integrally!!)

Get it together, man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

He paid their fucking credit card for a handjob each? Pathetic.

Set up payment plans, handjobs would be like 10 bucks, 20 to be generous

Awful story, bad pacing

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

First off why didn’t he move out the way they treated him prior to winning ,,, make the gold diggers come to him

Credit card bill paid off by a hand job ,,, I would be like f you ,,, and then the dresses for a blow job ,,, sad ,, then the sex for probably close to $100,000 necklaces ,,, and the attitude of the cousins for there education fees not to mention a weak 3some to pay collage off ,,and they were not even into it ,,then the aunt having an attitude at first for a blowjob to play off her daughters education ,, I would of called a cab home for that one ,,, he’s going to be broke and lonesome after the gold diggers get done with him ,, 3⭐️ border with a 2⭐️ for how you treated him

rbloch66rbloch6612 months ago

This is pretty trashy.

Gambit275Gambit2757 months ago

liked the part where his mom and aunt blew his grandpa

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