All Comments on 'Ice Guide Ch. 03'

Please one more ch., this was a great ending but, what happens with suzanne and her sister with this guy.

One more of your stories that I like A LOT!

Gonna give us a last (or more) chapter to see how it continues?

Maybe they take over the lodge for good...? Or get married and live happily ever after.. ;-)

Really good.allmost surreal.doing a good job.thanks

You suckered me into the story totally.

You wrote about 3 things I admire in a story -- wild country, fishing and women. With that much fire power to fall back on, why end this tale now. The adventure is only beginning.

I found this series intriguing & sexually entertaining. You tell a good story about how a man should treat a woman. Not enough of us take the time to do that!!!

I really like your stories. These guys get themselves in the most riduculous but sensuous situations. They are kind lovers. And the women are empowered.

And "boos" the the guys who are glued to their TVs watching games and ignoring their wives.

I loved the story and would give it a 5, but there were a number of grammar errors. Also, at only one point is Janise referred to as Jan and that confused the hell out of me. It totally broke my immersion into the story as i scanned the previous pages trying to figure out who Jan was.

When the women come into the room before playing cards, Pat is wearing yoga pants and Marlene is wearing jeans. When the have to strip, Pat takes off jeans and Marlene takes of yoga pants. I lost my immersion again, right in the middle of strip poker.

Glad it was only Mike that got to sample ALL the goods.

When does chapter 4 come out?

This story lends itself to a forth chapter, maybe under the Romance category. Well written and enjoyable. Wonder what Jack would have to say. Opportunity!

Damn good story!

Great storyline; though, not sure the whole orgy thing was needed. Thank you.