All Comments on 'Ice Hockey 101 Ch. 01'

Glad to see it's posted! Nice job. :)

the poor lass.he's a twat.cant wait to read more and what he's going to do to make it up to her.but i hope she's no easy push over,she must make him work for it.hate it when the women roll over like dogs and submit and take the crap.the story.

Finally your back. Im soo glad to see that.

And this was a great start :)

Please dont leave againnn

OMG MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Great start! Looking forward to more!

And things were getting so hot!! Another great start from you.. I love Rebecca's character because I can so relate to her.. Poor dear must be shattered at the end of this chapter tough.. I can't wait for the next chapter. Hopefully, Sean will make a cameo.. with Amelia and their child. *hint hint*

We love seeing the Pens get the love and the Gronk is no exception.. Wonder when Geno's gonna get the love.

I was so happy to see your new posting. I enjoy both your hockey and TAITS stories. Please keep up the wonderful work!

good start keep it coming please

really loving these hockey stories! can't wait for the next chapter. keep it coming!

This is definitely one of the best 1st chapter i've read. I loved it very much and Josh is such a sweet guy!

I feel like I should tell you, the author, that I don't like to be teased! Nice cliffhanger ending, sheesh. I want to know what that was about -- obviously she was inexperienced from how awkward she acted with him. Also, there are far, far too many mentions of her blushing in front of him (this seems to be a common thread in your stories, though).

Overall, though, I enjoyed this story. In fact, I even learned some things about hockey from this, since I'm barely more educated than Rebecca (but I can't believe she wouldn't even know what a goalie is, I mean, c'mon!).

As for the erotic stuff, you have a way of making even a rather chaste kiss smokin' hot. I'm looking forward to when he finally "scores" with her!

Jordan Staal, perfect choice.

8. Ice Hockey 101 (JS and Rebecca)

http://www.literotica.com/s/ice-hockey-101-ch-02

"I'd rather concentrate on hockey. I don't have time for women." said no hockey player ever. haha.

But seriously, what a sweet story! I just wish more hockey players were like this guy....