All Comments on '...I'll Call YOU'

I'm glad it worked out in the end with Patty and Susie. I loved this story with two great characters in Patty and Susie and the journey to find a relationship that works for them. A thought provoking story about the uncertainty at times between what we believe to be consent and not. Smokey you bring an emotional mix of sweet and despair to this story that is brilliant, you engage the reader so well. Brilliant as usual Smokey, thank you

Jc

Overall a great story. Well written and emotional.

I like Patty's character, but she's emotionally unstable and immature. Just the poor girl's luck to receive "help" from a self proclaimed nice person. Susie is an oblivious, irresponsible idiot and quite the destructive force in Patty's life.

Patty is lucky to have survived her influence.

Now, just as Patty puts the pieces of herself back together again..... Susie isn't finished yet is she? If there were ever another chapter, it would probably be the death of poor Patty.