All Comments on 'I'm Only Sleeping'

LMAO, HDK you are the wackiest, most perverted man in the world! Enjoy the title. And thank you for the story!

absolutely fucking great

I don't think I'd be able to sleep for a week!

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Written, as always, with your own unique slant on humor and equally unique situations to apply it to. Who would've thunk that her Uncle Buck dying would give him such pleasure.

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Lovely job of defining Brenda's character. You should reprise her in another story ... how about "Bad Boy?"

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Fun story!

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Regards, Jack

that's a nice story - please send me Annie's adress, will you?

that was hilarious. you create the funniest situations.

Okay, no more complaints about longer, more detailed stories. You're just too damned good doing what you do best. Another 6 points, as usual.

...or awesome, or whatever means that these days. Good stuff, HDK. Excellent read.

I dont know whether to laugh or say that is the stupidest plot I have ever read...

OK... its sunnyband warm here in VA.... Lets go with ROTFLMAO!!

a half hour ago and I'm still laughing. Thanks, HDK.

Humor and a shrp little twist to confuse us all. There is nobady that can do that as well as HDK! My fingers keep stuttering because I'm laughing so hard while trying to type! You sir are the master.

For a writer that, in my opinion, may be the most talented on this site, I felt that this story was not paricularly funny, and was totally stupid. What a disappointing tale by a normally fine writer.

60 year old George

Only HDK can get his characters into the most absurd situations imaginable and still steer them through chaotic minefields of almost-infidelity to conjugal bliss. Thanks for another entertaining read. :D

I loved when Jeff gets the phone call and the wife says it wasnt jeff that has cancer it was another jeff i about busted my side open laughing if only that call never came he could have had the the sister lol.

Pat

Not erotic, not particularly funny, saw the ending coming as soon as she mentioned the dying part. I hope your other stories are better than this.

Brenda seems like a true "Loving Wife." Interesting, twisty story.

did you drink too much when you sat down to bank on the keyboard? or did you have an advanced microsoft dictation program, in which you could speak to the computer and it types it up for you? <p>

this is as braindead as a 6th grade boy dreaming of touching some tits...... it's downright insulting to us who like to think you're a mature, creative, interesting writer. I don't care how many silly head pompom boys and girls jump and clap for you over this silliness... this is a skank of a silly nonsensical story!

Wish more of thee writers who walk the loving wives halls had some notion what a loving wife really is.

Enjoyed the hell out of it!

This little epistle conforms with most of the rest of HDK's stories: it starts with a little twist of a punchline and it works backwords into the surrounding story.

As usual it is amusing. It is original. Not great literature, but what the hell is?

I have trouble understanding the complaints of the complainers, but every cat his own rat.

I enjoyed the cute plays on words and the absurdity of the situation you dreamed up. Please keep writing. I know The Beatles wrote a lot of songs, but you are so prolific you may need to do The Rolling Stones next.

I love your humorous take on the little games we play in and out of marriage.

Boyd

The worst story ever posted to this site. It will get higher ratings than it deserves because of who wrote it.

I would say Brenda was a really loving wife.. Trying to give him a last wish.. One can't get a better wife, can one?? I betcha she keeps a closer eye on her sister after this!! A fun read!

HDK: <p>Encouraging her husband to sleep with her sister is this wife's idea of fulfilling her husband's alleged fantasy? If this is how the wife really feels, it doesn't say much for their marriage. Perhaps her being so adamant in insisting that he share a bed with her sister would indicate that said fantasy is more hers than his.</p> <p>The ending was really no surprise. The story would have had little meaning with any other ending.</p> <p>HDK, I acknowledge you as one of the best writers here. I have very often enjoyed your submissions. However, perusing the responses already posted, I do think you got a pass on this one.</p>

Fucking FANTASTIC!!

Excellent literature. This should've been entered in a contest. Also, give us a sequel - your humor is compelling

Anyone can show (or at least try to show) how bad miscommunication is in relations; it takes much more imagination and creativity to show how mishaps and shortcomings in communications could land a married man in heavenly bliss and every one ends up happy after learning an important lesson! The catch? There is no catch! It’s another fun story by HDK after all!

by a very funny writer. Thanks for this one!

ohio

Enjoyed this story. It was well written and thought out, not to mention that the miscommunication made it extremely funny. I loved it! BRAVO!!!!

The title is the message.

Good stuff. Thanks

Brilliantly funny stuff! I wish Brenda had decided to let Jeff have his evening with Annie just for the hell of it. After all, the whole thing was her idea to begin with. Can you imagine? "Oh Jeff, sorry for the misunderstanding. I love you and my sister both so very much, and now she's about to swallow your seed.... Oh hell, you guys look so hot together I think I'll join you!"

that was great. Thanks!

I've read almost all your stories. And I love them. Please continue to wirte!

I loved this story. Maybe you could of called it (A Death Gone Wrong).

Thank You!!!

As always my compliments J. I like your stories and this one has a fine quality of humer. R.T.

I am sure I left it somewhere Here ! Anyone seen my humer ?

Therefore, I didn't finish reading the story and I rated it 1*.

Great sense of humor. Lighten up some of you. This is light humor. DWornack...you are retarded!

and writes too little. So far, all I've seen of his work are lame comments. He can either put up some work, or shut the fuck up.

DWornock if you didn't finish reading it, you shouldn't comment. DWornock, you are a dumb ass!

I enjoyed the humer in this story along with the complete enertainment of the story itself.

I loved it -

Dwornock - of course it could happen and I would bet money it has and more than 0once - both seriously and like this due to misunderstanding - lol -

Well written and nicely timed -

One of HDK's best, in my humble opinion. The story was well written and managed to be both erotic and funny as hell.

A masterful job and four stars!

Great. I loved this, no cheating, no revenge, just a great story. Thanks.

It was funny. But some how I got the feeling that you had something else in your mind. I'm a thinking you got a page 2 we ain't seen yet. But I still gave it a 5.

Thanks Knight! Another winner! 5 stars.

do you dream up these situations. Thanks HDK.

people dont realize how difficult it is to come up with a story line and put it to paper and make it interresting. you have a talent. 5

Another masterclass in storytelling. Thank you.

Ann sweet.

Keep it in the family (till the end!)

5*. Finest kind!

Thanks for the effort.

Very funny story HDK. Very, uhm, uh, 'tongue in cheek'.......

I am willing to sacrifice myself volunteering to die by dualing sisters.

Unfortunately at this stage of my life, I am more likely to keel over

from a hearty handshake.

i've been reading stories for a while now here in literotica,, this is the first time a story here made me actually laugh..you're good bro,, thnx

I enjoyed it very much. Gave you a 5.

Callie

SHIT! My wife doesn't have any sisters! Cheers!

A real loving wife.

Truly amazing.

He did "hit the lottery".

except Uncle Buck. He didn't think it was funny!

Thanks for sharing.

This was funny, as heck... I thought the wife was cheating the whole time LOL

but what a way to go/cum..TK U MLJ LV NV

A loving wife cared for her husband so much she wanted his last days to be incredible. Since he's not dying, will she be just as nice?

Ha

a terrific woman, unselfish, loving, what state does the sister live in? nice story

well deserving of 5 stars , really should have been in the humor & satire genre.

but ... by placing it in the loving wives , it actually made the story much more funny , because as a reader you are totaly thrown for a loop at the end .

simply Brilliant ... Outstanding.... i so wish there was more Hidden Jems like this one mixed into all the dark & angst filled Loving Wives section .

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

hilarious...

Every wife (and husband, for that matter!), should treat their mate as if they would be losing them soon.

Then we would have TRUE Loving Wives stories!

HDK at his best.

A true loving wife story and a loving family. I enjoyed it and gave it a five. KarenE's comment deserves a 10. It is so refreshing reading about people who know what love is and act accordingly. Thank you for a fine tale.

I'm sorry, but no wife who was brought up as explained in the beginning of the story and loves her husband would offer up her sister to him. And this guy is dumb as a box of hammers if he thinks there isn't something behind this setup. At first I thought it was a get even fuck for her cheating on him. Some say 'Don't look a gift horse in the mouth', but I like to think more along the lines of 'Beware of Greeks bearing gifts' until you know the whole story. This could have ended with her demanding a 'free pass' after what he did even if she did push the point.

Can't anyone just accept the authors story as written? OMG, just go on and write your own story and post it. Write it however you like and then all the "What IFers" can spend endless hours dissecting and rewriting it.

Anyway, another 5* fun story by Harddaysknight.

Just My Opinion, YMMV

Morgan DeWolfe

Why is Stella not paying any consequences for releasing confidential medical information?

It's just a story damn it, and a good one at that.

Of course facts and reality matter. Otherwise the story doesn't work. You remind me of that scene from Animal House...

Bluto: Over? Did you say "over"? Nothing is over until we decide it is! Was it over when the Germans bombed Pearl Harbor? Hell no!

Otter: Germans?

Boon: Forget it, he's rolling.

Oh come on peoples! This is a very funny story! ! The sister and her husband wow ! Think about it your wife is offering her sister to Fuck you! Would you say no! Hell I would be so there Great story! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

I want to read more stories like this. You have included hilarious situations in your stories that thrill me. I never get tired of reading them. Now this is the kind of entertaining stories I truly enjoy. Thank you so much.

Geriatric sex I guess. Ewwww! Old man balls!

I really enjoy your cute little romps like this one. Thanks again for another great laugh and happy ending.

Five stars for sure!

What's with the negative comments? This is fantasy; it's arousing, funny, and sweet--just like good sex.

larious!

to read this man's work. Love HDK :-)

It's a great thing, ladies... unless you don't use it properly, of course.

Hilarious, well done.

Buhahahaa...lol. That was a good one!

Now this is HDK in form! A hearty laugh and 5 stars.

Funny, funny. I loved it. Definitely 5 star worthy.

Thanks,

MGM

I even saw the humor in the commenters who saw humer in the humor! (Does their spellcheck not work?)

Amused,

Paul in Oklahoma

I think I am feeling a little light headed. Maybe I need some family medical assistance. Thanks for the smile!

Another load of crap.

What a fertile mind!

Critics are assho,es. Let's see your writing.

What an entertaining story. Laughed hard and thoroughly enjoyed it.5*s.

Really funny little misunderstanding story, great fun!

That was a good one. I really like Brenda. She sounds like a good one.

Brenda is a lovable and original character. Lots of situational humor and fun. Just a great feel-good story. Keep 'em coming.

That was creative and original, and very funny! Somehow, I expected him to still be in trouble with his wife in the end, even though it was her idea, but she turned out to be a great wife! Thanks for the story.

From the beginning I was thinking that Brenda was having an affair and giving her husband guilt sex. It shows what jumping to conclusions can result in. Great 5 Star read!

Very funny story thankyou.

When I was Married to My First Wife .. She had a Great Sister That everyone wanted to play with .. The wife I have now would kill Me .. She gets jealous easily but then again so do I .. Why go out and Cheat with a fast food Hamburger .. When You Have Prime Rib at home