All Comments on 'Impulse'

Wow. What a sexy wife. Nice setup of scenes, believable and erotic. One thing seems incomplete though. It sounds like she might have been drugged by the guys she met at the bar. All her inhibitions seem to be down more than reasonable. The story hints around that idea but never fleshes it out. It's lucky she wasn't raped. When you want to play like that you need to be careful where you are.

Good read once it finally got going but the beginning was way too much needless information , but after that it got moving .

I think I see trouble looming on the horizon.

thanx

Follow up maybe?

Sure, probably. Who knows? What is good for the Goose and all of that.

MGM

....a naive wife with a hot body and a relationship without firm boundaries, what could go wrong????

As others have said there appears to be no consensus between the couple. Which can and will lead to trouble later on. Of course it might be the sort of trouble they both want. If that is the case then good luck to them.

Although from a personal stand point I am not sure I would want my wife to allow another man or woman to do the things she did.

But as always well written and an interesting story.

Made me uncomfortable all the way through. Good work, magmaman.

He should either keep her under strict supervision of some kind, or not worry, if she lets it all hang out and screws everyone that smiles at her. I don't think I could stand a sequel.

Enough atypical behavior to warrant an open eye - be ware of trouble -

Her self control along with her gullibility make her a high risk person alone - the latest friends may well have messed with her drink.

Like the word "slip" it's being overused here in LW land.

Does she do 'On impulse', when hubby isn't around? If he was 30 minutes later, would she have been naked in the back of a car? Hubby likes to show her off, but also wants her to be his, and ONLY his. She doesn't seem to see the distinction. Agree with the others, there is trouble ahead, and he will get a nasty surprise in the not too distant future.

"... he felt like he couldn't move."

And that's how you can spot a shitty writer.

I gave it a 5

so they will all know what an asshole you really are. 5 for content and effort.

Why, have you given up???? All those follows and the stories are great.

Are you OK? and are you still with us?