All Comments on 'In His Domain of Hell Ch. 01'

by we_all_kneel

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Flame34Flame346 months ago

I'm curious what will happen next. I hope we get to see a little more of Goliath

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe20296 months ago

Oh. Very interesting. Good world building & dynamics. Let's see how this sexy Ponzi scheme of energy goes. 😈

nthusiasticnthusiastic6 months ago

Very interesting domain you’ve created although at times it was somewhat difficult to follow as an abundance of pronouns left unclear exactly who was doing what to whom. He, him, his often referred to different individuals within a single sentence I.e.’He reached for him and placed his cock in his mouth.’ Open to interpretation? Anyway, thank you for sharing your talents with us.

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