All Comments on 'In Love with Lori Ch. 06'

keep the great work coming

You succeed brilliantly at painting Lori's rage at David, along with all her feelings for him and you wrap it all up nicely by showing how they first couple and how it changes them both forever. You juxtapose the extreme pain at losing both parents with the joy of them both discovering each other. Well done!

I had forgotten about this and checked when the other chapters were written and now I see why I had--because it had been so long. Nevertheless, the wait removed no luster whatsoever from Lori and David's story. Thanks again. An easy 5

How about telling the story about the four year between Robbie leaving and Casey finding him at that hotel chain on the day she spots him that would be an interesting read. Please thank about it.

When's the next chapter coming out

Work has been a bit burdensome lately, so I haven't been able to address Chapter 7 as early as I would have liked, but now that 2/3 of it is completed the rest is bound to follow soon!

Hopefully I will be able to encompass the rest of the untold story, up to and including the story of how Richard and Hugo finally fell, and who they fell for, what happened to Bella the Beast and Maude, and Jimmy, Rosie, and baby Gemma's story, as well as a little about Lori's bond with Sophie and Richard...and why Sophie and Lori's mother, Jane, looked so much alike.

If I can fit it all into one chapter without boring the socks off everyone, I will, otherwise Chapter 8 looks likely...

How much longer till chapter 7

i waited till chapter 7 to be published to read Chapter 6. of course, 5 stars! what a wonderful sexy story told by a brilliant writer! loved it. I think you could keep Lori alive in a few more stories from the UK - carrying on from where you left the story in the epilogue. i love Lori - and this story!!!

CHAPTER 6 HUMANIZES LORI INTO A LOVE SICK HUMAN FOR BROTHER. IF IT WAS WORKED INTO THE ORIGINAL STORY, THE FUCK FEST SLUT ROUTINE IS NOW UNDERSTANDABLE.

You did mention that David's second father and Lori's father died, but you didn't explain what or how he died. I'm glad we finally got an explanation and also got to know what their mother went through before she died. It's sad, but it makes the story even better. Keep up the great writing.

this is the only chapter I have read, so far. Excellent writing of Lori's thoughts thru the years and her parents troubles. someone must have an anal fixation as it seems rather out of place for 2 young people finding a sexual love.