All Comments on 'In Safe Hands'

The actual sex was too short... having a baby on the way is a bonus, but Jasmine joining their new life is a let down.

Needed more loving and time together.

How did he leave the Army? Needed more understanding about retiring, but still a good story.

I liked it. A well written story despite what some fucking sick anon commenters might say.

Ignore the trash talkers, they couldn't craft a good story to save their lives. Really nice job, I particularly enjoyed the way you handled the dialogue; thanks again.

I liked the story, but it didn't flow as smoothly as one would like. You dropped Jaz into the story as an after thought. Who is she? Why is she hitting on him. Why is she so important to them that she would come out west? Needed a little more character development, and story seemed rushed at the end. Keep up the story, want to see where this leads. Thanks

Hot story. I liked the pregnancy as well. Would like to see more character development in future chapters. 5 star rating :)

Well told! Thanks for sharing.

Nerds a 2 nd part

needs another chapter

Please add another chapter 5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Well written. And believable.

Thank you

with a little more buildup...nice writing though.

Too much build up, not enough payoff, for me. Not that I didn't enjoy the build up, I did. I just would have liked more pay off not really more sex, though that would be nice too, but more of the love story.

I've read a few of your stories now and I'm noticing a pattern. You tend to build a story great, nice character development and good stage setting but what I would consider the first scene of the intermission of your play, you make as your ending. Your great at setting the scene, but what happens after. At least this one did have a small couple of paragraphs for a 'happily ever after', but I was still left wanting more of the story.

Great story , Fantastic characters, Well written and presented! Loved the ending!

Loved the story but it could have used more sex and not so much build up, and you went from them having sex to moving away there should have been more to it then that, still gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it but it could have used more sex gave it a 5

could have an update with jaz too