All Comments on 'In The Dark'

be on the site, much less write stories that are published,

I don't know what that has to do with this story. I enjoyed it much, but it should have been shorter.

It would shift from person to person without clarification or designation in the same paragraph. A few times we didn't even know who was talking, or being talked about. The blindfold scene was a mess. Who was wearing it? How did she get Carl (was the other man Carl?) to move around while he hovered over her chest and she shifted the chair to line up with Gavin? And, since they had not spoken, had not been introduced, how did she know Gavin's name???