by DetectiveSpecialist
Fine stroke story . Usually this author goes for 2fer of bona fide characters. It got a little claustrophobic with only two exploring a heavy dynamic and craziness ensued. I greedily wanted mom to explore her fledgling praying mantis aspect and son to challenge this mom 'fatale 'on multiple levels. Kathleen Turner circa late nineties popped in mind as mom, maybe Cybill Sheppard.
I loveeeeed the mother and son tension and how rough they got. Would've been nice to see maybe some hair pulling, choking, slapping, etc but still was great. Only thing I didn't like was the lack of describing the orgasm. That's always my favorite part of the story. But it lead up to It then it said they were laying next to each other. Great idea for writing though and you did a good job other than that. :-) I couldn't help but wish I was in her position!
Mom was a bad girl and so hot! She wanted and needed to be punished for her cheating, and her son filled that need nicely. Maybe a good spanking next time! Very hot, wished there was another chapter after an editor reviews.
I understand full well, that this does happen. However I just can't understand why women who are married but can't keep their legs closed to others, won't do what is right and divorce? If they had an ounce of real love for their husbands or cared at all it is what they should do.
Interesting. I'm not into fucking my mother, but the story was interesting and well written.