All Comments on 'Inappropriate Ch. 01'

Married her. Asked and made sure there was not a policy forbidding instructor student relationships. After dating several over a few years, found the one that was my soul mate, although she was in her thirties and I a few years older. Doesnt mean I didnt sample some the twentysomethings tho...........

This is meant as honest, hopefully constructive criticism. Try dropping all of the extra emphasis words and introductory phrases you tend to pepper throughout your writing - truly, simply, and yet, etc. Strip all of them out and then read through your story again, preferably out loud. It will flow better, and then you can hear where you might naturally want to use an emphasis word. Use them sparingly, though, or else it becomes the basis for a drinking game. Truly! Good luck and keep writing.

I love the romance!