by dr mabuse SOI
Great story line, well written with a little of everything in it. Keep up the good writing.
The story was well written, and very easy and interesting to follow...I enjoyed it.
Nice and relexing read. I could picture that happening. Hope to see a sequel. You might want to check out a proof reader, there were a few wrong word usages in there. Keeop writing.
To tell the truth, Mother/Son stories usually (99% of the time) turn me off. This one was one of the rare ones that I really enjoyed. I'd like to see the sequel you hinted at.
No wonder you are called "the Godfather" of Literotica.
One of the best stories I ever read.
Very good story and very beliveable. Hope you plan on continuing the story.
Long build up but that really set the stage, a sequel or even a series based on this would be good. One of your best.
Extreme heat, nobody getting disrespected. Very erotic and to my taste.
Very lovely story, feels good until the end. Wished for a second part where that family arrangement is told.