All Comments on 'Incestuous Harem 09'

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sp9983sp9983over 2 years ago

This part was boring. It's time to wrap this story up.

Sohioslim78Sohioslim78over 2 years ago

Don't listen to the negative it's great

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 2 years ago

If you could just drop the pissing down someone's throat, it'd be a decent story..

Domklaus6666Domklaus6666over 2 years ago

I think it has potential, maybe a contest to see who could get the most slaves for him. Or a good fight for control of women between clint and zoey's girlfriend

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago

I have to agree with the comment of "don't listen to the negative"...keep writing your nasty harem story for those of us who APPRECIATE IT!!

Now, on to Zoey and her smart mouth and bad attitude toward Clint. Her punishment and SUBMISSION is gonna be SSSWWWEEEEETTTTT!!

**5** STARS...AGAIN, AND AGAIN!

Diecast1Diecast1over 2 years ago

Good chapter . I like it a lot. AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I'm loving everything but the watersports.

Frankie1952Frankie195211 months ago

The watersport is a degrading and abusive thing but this is your story and I can skip the bits I don't like and enjoy the bits I do.

rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop8 months ago

1/5 their is a separate category for the watersport fetish , skimmed half thos chapter

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...

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