by mypenname3000
If you could just drop the pissing down someone's throat, it'd be a decent story..
I think it has potential, maybe a contest to see who could get the most slaves for him. Or a good fight for control of women between clint and zoey's girlfriend
I have to agree with the comment of "don't listen to the negative"...keep writing your nasty harem story for those of us who APPRECIATE IT!!
Now, on to Zoey and her smart mouth and bad attitude toward Clint. Her punishment and SUBMISSION is gonna be SSSWWWEEEEETTTTT!!
**5** STARS...AGAIN, AND AGAIN!
The watersport is a degrading and abusive thing but this is your story and I can skip the bits I don't like and enjoy the bits I do.
1/5 their is a separate category for the watersport fetish , skimmed half thos chapter