All Comments on 'Indentured Pervitude 16'

A história que tinha potencial para ser uma das melhores do site , tornou-se numa das mais ridículas e decepcionantes que já li

Wendy virou uma decepção, esse conto já nem tinha que pertencer a essa categoria

im so sorry you are a great writer, and i do like this story in some parts but, as i said before the love has gone no after care and worse than that no feelings for him at all. maybe let them get divorce and be done with it. maybe his mum can pay of what he owes and take care of him because really this is turning out not to be very erotic at all im sorry

There’s always consequences for our actions. Little did Tom think how his previous uncaring misdeeds might come back to haunt him. I’m wondering if Pandora’s box is just about to be opened…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great story.

Yeah, I'm with @kidshouse. Sorry, your writing is quite good, but this just lost the last vestiges of eroticism for me. No love left in it. I'm out.

Hes going to have to put up with her abuse until hes free but once that happens he should be away from her. deffinately not any sort of loving wife just an abuser

She could have been portrayed as using her newfound control to lovingly change his attitude and get what she wants and needs. Instead, she's turned into a shrew and the reader actually feels bad for, what was once, A bad guy. As soon as she starts cucking him with other guys, I'm out!