All Comments on 'Inhibitions out the Window'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
principles

good to see some people don't take the easy way. Stupid ? Maybe, but they live by their own principles. And that's worth something in our minds. G.Belgium

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 16 years ago
Fascinating Premise

Cannot help but ask the question - knowing what I know about life, would I stay or go? I think I'd stay and enjoy the ride, but who knows? Great story!

BenLongBenLongabout 16 years ago
Liked it

Saw it coming, seemed somewhat predictable, but very enjoyable. A little more detail in places, but otherwise OK. No character development on Cary, just in and out of the story, so missed on the feeling of dominance. As for Darla, there she was, obviously a player, but nothing further than oral just once? Simultaneous "massages" but no outright orgy? Just seemed at times to lack a little character and scene development, otherwise outstanding - enough that I'm going to check out what else you've written.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 12 years ago
Log thumpers all -

Most people cannot be paid enough to just thump logs for life - but some people can -

Of course there is the whole personal dignity thing too -

Nice story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
had it set up

if only this was real.....when it is given to you on a plate take it and enjoy it for a while instead of getting all pissy about.....life is too short......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Sounds real

I've met rich "I'm the ONLY one that really matters" types like Cary. Good story. Hard to do the first person, well done

jimjam69jimjam69over 3 years ago

He made a smart move. Get the hell out.

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