All Comments on 'Initial Infiltration'

This is a great start. I hope you are intending to continue the story.

I agree with Malkor, this has great potential for an entire series of chapters (ok, I'm a geek for Sci-Fi) so don't leave us hanging here, keep writing. Thanks for the many great stories that you've given us.

Very good indeed, excellent job.

Okay story, like the idea, kinda feel sorry for Donaldson though. He seemed like the only one who deserved to, y'know... NOT die.

Excellent! Requires a strong suspension of disbelief (I mean, a soldier in a new dimension would hardly disarm himself and strip naked), but the plot is perfect--a race invaded by "us" creates the perfect counter-weapon: us. Too bad the Sioux couldn't have done the same. The soldier has to die--else what is the point of the story? Very well done!

fuckin great story man

Nice story... And the soldier did not really die... perhaps he is even better off now :)

Love this. Hope you continue it

creepy in a fine way - well I don't think I would initiate first contact by f@cking the alien.

And... I have seen the fly cather flower at an exhibition, so for him to lay down naked in a flower?

But a very good story! Thanx