All Comments on 'Innocent Fun'

Great first up effort Princess. I hope this was only part 1. Surely Vinnie moves in.

Short and sweet, and pretty damn good. Keep it going, that storyline has potential.

Only 4 stars because it needed a bit more Vanni development. Like why she decided to take the lead. Otherwise very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

You can take this far, keep up the good work! I agree, a little more on why the roomie took the lead would be good, but you've got it going on! Looking forward to your other submissions.

Bit short, but I prefer that over those over-long stories sometimes..

Perfect for a quickie before bed hehe ;D