All Comments on 'Insect Sex Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Gave nothing but tease. Too long for that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I agree with the last coment!

tallman441tallman441about 3 years ago

Good story, but I agree with other two. A little bit too long to be a tease. Good characters, The daughter playing mind games with her father. Looking forward to her closing the deal.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Two stars. While the writing was better than most, you wasted our time. We are not supportive nor pleased.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Insect? I was at least hoping to read about incest with ants or was that aunts? Anyway, the story was pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Afte rereading several first page paragraphs, I founsyou rational for so many decisions were not at all logical. Why would tight clothing make exercise less restrictive, or why would replacing a home computer require a platform change? Mac or PC are the choices. There are other examples as well. That was it for me.

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