All Comments on 'Inspiring Mom (With Son's Help)'

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HeyAllHeyAllover 5 years agoAuthor
Author's Note

This is an older story of mine that I rewrote.

I hope you've all enjoyed it.

Heyall

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Familiar

Thanks to your comment I knew I had read it before. Still enjoyed it. Keep it up.

Oldergenteman69Oldergenteman69over 5 years ago
I thought

It sounded familiar. I always love a good Mother and Son story and this is one of them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot as fuck

Had me draining my cock before they fucked

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Best Literotica story ever,

Absolutely the best. Congratulations!

parthenogenesisparthenogenesisover 5 years ago
Great premise ;-)

The title of this comment says it all.

swfb70swfb70over 5 years ago
loved it

very nice-very very nice

gagnecgagnecover 5 years ago
Great

Awesome story. In fact all your stories are great. Thanks

daylilygardenerdaylilygardenerover 5 years ago
Hot Story

You had me wanting them to have sex much earlier in the story...but waiting was so arousing. Another great read by a talented author. 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
INSPIRATION

YOU HAVE DONE A FANTASTIC JOB WITH THE REWRITE. WOW, THIS WAS HOT. A SLOW , BUT NOT TOO SLOW SEDUCTION.

satinpantyboysatinpantyboyover 5 years ago
Of course!

We always enjoy your sexy mom/son stories! Thanks for the repost!

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
WOW!!!

well written, very sexy. great tease, 2 strong characters. 5 stars. i really enjoyed reading this. i hope you write a sequel. the story has legs!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great story

I couldn't stop reading this story. Well written , made me jerk off a few times. Can't wait to read more.

ipreferoralipreferoralover 5 years ago
Minor language comment...

"Labia" is plural for "labium". There are an inner pair and an outer pair. Good for a 5, regardless.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 5 years ago
Evidently Amped Up Tease Intensity Factor During Rewrite

Very nice and impeccable pacing on the way to payoff climatic scene.

grayge37grayge37over 5 years ago
Always . . .

have enjoyed your stories. This one is no exception. I continually look for your name while checking for a story to read. and of course, I'm never disappointed.

Five Stars!!!

Looking forward for your next entry.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

Loved it! Very fucking hot!!

devildog0302devildog0302over 5 years ago
I like it...

Wouldn’t mind reading another chapter, maybe them working on the next book and adding some new experiences for mother and son. Won’t she have to keep expanding their horizons to keep the plot fresh?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Inspired for sure.

Well done! I love your woke.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great

Love your stories wish some were series and no just one shot

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Interesting

Very well done, mom/son incest told from a different angle.

Omart57Omart57over 5 years ago
You always write

such good incest stories! This one was exceptional !

Ironman52Ironman52over 5 years ago
5* Want more

I like this a lot. Flowed well. It will be on my re-read list.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loving Mother

A most plausible and readable story. Loved it.

fireguydfwfireguydfwover 5 years ago
Always Sizzling

Your stories are always at the top of my "Best of" list. This is a classic and I love the update. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
GOOD

Good short story, kind of a love story. Well written.

xsiveonexsiveoneover 5 years ago
Wow!

This may have been an older story to you but it read very well and new to me! You had me all the way; I loved it! Thanks for redoing it.

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
What A Original Storyline*****

Very entertaining I like the way thing happen nothing rushed or planed. Thanks for sharing.

allnitedinerallnitedinerover 5 years ago
True to form

Loved it. You know just how to slowly build sexual tension before a big payoff. I always know I'll have a good time with one of your reads. Thanks for keeping it up figuratively and actually.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
oxL

reads life a autobiography

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
Another very good story

Great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very hot

Always enjoy your work, very arousing and looking forward to your next piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Damn you

i failed no nut November because of this.

mammoetmammoetover 5 years ago
loved it

she could write more books!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great start and Great read!

This definitely needs a second chapter where Ben keeps his Mother's womb full of his seed, and winds up getting her pregnant with the first of their children together. Then goes on to keep her pregnant several times, and gets to feed from her nipples after her breasts fill with milk. Look forward to possibly seeing more from this story, and your other stories too. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A white hot story!

I'd say it was a win - win situation for both. And just think, if the mother gives birth to girls, then when the daughters come of age, then just maybe...Anyway, more chapters ASAP!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mom full of cum and she loves to leak down her leg

Having sons cum leaking at a book sighning makes her horny

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yes!!

That was sooooo erotic and dirty, loved it!! Those are things I wished I could have with my beautiful and sexy!!! Love your writing, keep up the erotic writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Amazing

Wow this was so vivid

NawtyMeNawtyMeover 2 years ago

FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

I LOVED IT!!!!!!

It's more realistic when she tells him her pussy belongs to him!!!!!I

I Love it!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A deliciously erotic story. Thanks for firing my heartbeat to pounding pulse in my ears.

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