All Comments on 'Intercourse Inn'

by Erlikkhan

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Friskee_cplFriskee_cplabout 19 years ago
Fantastic

Excellent build up and a nice way to finish.

Well done.

don87654don87654about 19 years ago
It was okay.....

It was okay, but could have been better. Since you knew both of your couples were going to fuck since you had been drinking, it would have been much better if you both got naked as soon as you got in the motel room. If Susan wanted a bit of privacy, the two of you could have slipped under the covers immediately. This story could have been much more erotic if you had taken some time to write it meaningfully....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Awesome

As usual, I love your stories and they get me off perfectly.

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