All Comments on 'Intervention Ch. 03'

Keep it coming, very good story. Hope to see the next installment soon.

I started to read this and was coming even before I was half way through the story. Nice writing.

I don't remember reading chapters 1 and 2, but this chapter can stand alone and still be enjoyed.The writing is well done, and the descriptive sex is vividly explained. For us nasty boys, there's nothing better than a mother/son/sister fuck story, and this one is good and nasty. Thanks for the post ......Rich

Wonderful story. Very erotic. I hope that at some point you do a spin off about Nela. That's one sexy woman.

Wonderful story. Very erotic. I hope we get to see a spin off series about Nela. That is one sexy woman.

Of all the stories I have read on Literotica, this is my favorite. What man would not kill to be in Thomas' place? He needs to do Esmeralda now......so many possibilities! Thanks for writing, more please!

This is a great story. I loved it. The only thing I would ask is for more chapters as it ended "way" to soon.

I enjoyed reading this story, it is fantastic. You should write more stories like this one soon.

All 3 chapters were very well done. They were VERY HOT You are good & I will be waiting to see what is next

you should make five more stories in the intervention series, the young ones on hand and more to cum! expert writing, descriptions, terminology, many hard-ons to come, or cum.

Very hot! Would make a great story line for an adult video. I can totally picture the hot action!

As stated below, I completely agree. I have been imaging pictures of the whole sex acts while reading and man have they turned me on.

I wish the series was longer as I know in 2 more chapters it ends but oh well, at least this story exists to read. ^_^

... very stimulating. Thank you. More.... on to Chapter 4 :-)

will not be enough

3 - is wishful thinking,

7 - is a pipe dream

I think the whole point is that this is complete fantasy, and it's a very erotica and exciting tale. Keep up the great work chunks!

You gotta love Nella! "Hi! I'm Nella!" (Dive, lick lick lick!!;)

But fun to read!

Just no words😛.keep on coming buddy z👍👍👍👍👍👍

I don't give 5's often, but you are earning them...

It's kind of hard to find fault with anyone. If they want to they fuck, if they don't they don't. No coercion, blackmail hypnosis b.s. Obviously if we come here for the incest category that's not bothering anyone. With all the photos on the Web of stars in their late 30s and older who look smoking hot it's not hard to imagine this. Hot harem story. You do tell a good story.

And a good time was had by all. HOOYAH!

GREAT JOB.

As he sticks it to ‘en I dream……. 5stars

Wow and re-wow. Excellent weaving of the plot.

5*

BJ

Loved it... again... I read this about 1 years ago. Thanks again for sharing!

Another great chapter I like everything else was when the MC said that they were gonna need more guys. I'm liking this story because there are lots of females but only one guy. I hope it keeps being this way. Most authors try to make their stories by involving more and more guys.

Omg so sucking fucking hot. What would I not give to join these hot cunt and fuck and suck my brains out. Cunt crazed fucker, Lanc’s UK.

Wow! Hot and very sexy storey. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Loved it, FIVE.