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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more!

Wow, that was gorgeous! You now have to write another story with Beth! I can't wait for a second part...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You desperately need an editor. If nothing else, needless comma after her name at top of Page 2.

Also, TON more "Mrs." after she corrects him.

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