by Momstheboss
If you can't be troubled to get the spelling of your main character's name right IN THE TITLE - I can't be bothered to read your story.
Too bad that they didn't get to fuck Lisa. I think a three way would have made a good movie for their webcast. Get the old gal air tight.
Thanks for the read.
A different take on the old Mom/son fucking story, but very good nevertheless. I enjoyed this a lot. Well written.
You have pretty good stories, but you really need to find someone to help you proofread and edit. The mistakes continuously disrupted the flow of the reading. When that happens, the story starts to take a back-seat. I have even begun to debate whether to read your submissions due to the mistakes.
In a way it's a sad story. Brian waited until his mid-30s to do what down deep he always wanted to do, what many many sons, who knows maybe most of them, want to do. Yeah, you got it in one--fuck his own mother. My guess is that it's hard-wired in the young male, this desire, this need to get back up the same cunt he came out of, now with the big hard cock he's sporting between his legs. Well, better late than never, and it's great that Brian's mother Lisa is gung-ho for welcoming her boy up between her own legs. She knows a big good-looking cock when she sees one, which her son Brian's cock is, as even the interviewer has to admit. They don't bother disguising what they're doing, why the fuck should they? It's the most natural and normal thing there is--a loving boy shoving his fat prick up his loving mother's beloved twat. Lisa yells, "Come on Brian! Its time for you to stick it in mother." He does, and he pumps away as he's done so many times before, till he blows his loaded balls up inside his mom and shoots her a great big twatful of his creamy semen. And Brian'll be doing that for years to come, like a good son should.
I didn't even read the story I just saw the title and laughed. You spelt Brian wrong
Yeah, if you can't even be bothered to spell one of the main character's names right in the title, then this probably isn't worth my time.
You even spelled it wrong once in the actual story!
Interesting comment prior to mine. He berated you for misspelling the characters name in the title, and then commented "probably isn't worth my time." Then said "You even spelled it wrong once in the actual story!" But he previously said he didn't take the time to read the story. Yeah right.
Good read. Keep doing your thing.
Warren