by eroticpen69
Is there any more will there be an ending to scott and sue or janet i would like to read the end of this story i give you a score 500 .
Pat
Atlanta,Ga
I do wish that you had finished up with how they handled the jerk husband, maybe later huh?
My God, you simply MUST finish this story. IT would be so CRUEL to leave us hanging in suspence about what happens with the two women, and the revenge of asswipe. I hope that they involve the "blackmailed secratary" in the R.E.V.E.N.G.E of ASSWIPE. His helpers need taken care of too, and ANYONE that he hase involved in this scheme..
Paul
... but some of it's just a bit... iffy. The anal rape sequence just slows it right down; you should've just had Sue and Janet have a nice meal out, then back to Sue's place for (slightly) drunken lesbian sex, then get revenge on that two-timing bastard.
You repeated stuff a lot. Like the girls sentances started with 'look', "Look so and so", "Look, sue ..", etc.
It really didn't grab me either. Eh.
I think Janet and sue's seduction should have come later than it did. She was raped and I think it should have taken more time to get over that. OPther than that, good story.
When the anal rape and beating wasn't reported to the police, that's where I stopped. I just scanned down to the rest to see if they had sex, and they did, which didn't make sense. It was not a matter of teaching Scott a lesson. It was about having him arrested as a rapist and abuser. You described a very brutal rape, and then the two women fuck. If this is your attitude towards rape, it's sad, sad, sad.
all men are evil and women my suffer under there yoke...so cant have love with out making the guy the bad guy.Over the top super villain evil husband,but you spell well.
I keep coming back to this one, because it is so good! Thank you for sharing it with us!
Domestic rape and beating is a serious crime in most western countries---so why didn't either of these women think of calling the police? Instead it was straight into the shower, washing away the evidence, and then sex. Janet's actions struck me as being totally insensitive---most women would be more concerned with helping a rape victim, not shagging her almost immediately. Sorry, but most of the story was implausible.
when you read it as a erotic tale of two people meeting and having a long waited sexual encounter, it is very good. it didn't quite get me off, but I enjoyed it a lot.
This is a very well written story and well told and I hope the next story is where Scott gets his come upperence thank you for such a story of this guy doing what he did to both the women .
A perfect example of a man hater story - regardless of the (sex or gender of this person).
You try and pass off Janet as this Amazonian hero but she is a worse person than Scott. Janet destroys the evidence of Sue's rape and then seduces her into having sex with her - what a sociopath.
Probably one of the worst stories on this site.
I agree Wholeheartedly with Foxyfowler. I Too would like a sequel to this. with Scott getting his come-uppanance with Scott's secretary backing them up