All Comments on 'Into the Attic'

I do not know about anyone else, But I would love a continuation of this story personally. It has a lot going for it in my mind

I don’t usually like stories that are over 3 pages long but I couldn’t help but read this one to the end. Looking forward to the next instalment.

fuck his Mom

As soon as he decide to just sit there and watch his Sister be manipulated and didn't do anything besides touch himself I knew he was a trash character.

Hope this is just the first chapter and this isn't a one off. Another great story.

Please, please continue.

I hope there will be more

Very good story. Hope it continues

You must keep going. I want to know how he gets Colleen and his mother, and what his dad does when he finds out.

You have to write part 2....want to find out about Colleen and mother

Your stories never fail to keep me tuned in, hard and happy. Keep up the good work!!

Keep this going. Please

WAA

Please?

Write this one next plz. Dont write any other sequels or new ones just this one. Also don't make him asshole who is fucking half the city like in your other story lol. Though I do love that and check for regular updates it is getting seriously out of hand on that one. This one though is fresh. And this maybe selfish(?) but don't get another guy involved, just 4 people.

Good storyline, nice build up. Wish you had described the blowjob. When you write parts two, three and more, please a little more detail. We know Mom is okay with it, so is Colleen. One catching the other in the act would be HOT. Then the next time Mom and Dad go at it she should roleplay as Colleen to give Dad permission to get with her while Mom is with Daniel.

By the way, you called Hope 'Beth' once. (Oops)

Since discovering your “spinal” series, you had me hooked. The stories are well written, paced very well, and have me craving for the next episode. Continue on and thank you!

The kirk thing is just lame

Holy fucking horniness Batman....MORE PLEASE!!!!

More, More, More Thanks

Not normally turned on by insest but this one is very good can hardly wait for the next chapter getting mother and other sister.

this seems like the start of a short series

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited sex. The love in the family will lead to many more stories.

was great, please add more , maybe mom and other sister!!

Another one of your great stories, please write more about into the Attic

One hell of a start .Thank you for the story .

I’ve been reading your stories from the beginning and truly enjoy the craft you exhibit with detailed character development and plot conflicts that supersede the mere sexual. No “slam, bam” from you! But if this is a stand alone story, it was too bogged down with the minutiae of his life. Detail is good, but can be taken to the extreme (eg. Stephen King). It almost seemed that you were toying with us to see how long we’d hang in there for the “good stuff”.

Don’t forget: “Brevity is the sole of wit.”

Great story so far. Hope you keep it up. Good plot and buildup; worth the time spent reading.

Very well written. Loved the pace of the plot development.

the best story I ever read on here.i hpe it continues id love to hear him with both sisters and especially mom.want hear him licking there kittys and pleasing them all.such great story written on here cant wait to read more

I loved this story. You set everything up just right so when it came to the sex, you understood why it was happening. I love how the mom seemed to love the thought of fucking her son. Colleen definitely would have fucked Daniel if Hope hadn't come along. I join the long line of your fans in calling for a continuation so we can see how everything turns out. I'd like to see the idea of casual nudity carried through and the whole family get into each other. The hot dad needs to get some too if the mom does!

Please continue with their story. I really enjoyed everything about it. I can see both sisters involved and maybe even mother. You did mention the aunt sleeping in the living room. Lots of ways to go with it. Looking forward to further reading.

I agree with most of the others. Sex4lf57 makes some good points. The casual nudity and role play with mom and dad. Collen and Daniel get together next then Mom and Daniel. Collen and Dad after he role plays with Mom.

I've read tens of thousands of stories and your work is the kind that keeps me coming back for more I look forward to reading a follow up to this

Amazing story and I hope that you do continue with this storyline, I love it so much

I agree with everyone who commented on this story. It was beautifully done and I can’t wait for parts 2, 3, & 4. I want to see Mom involved with Daniel, Colleen and Daniel, Dad and each daughter and maybe Colleen and Hope. This is such a good storyline it could go on forever. Well done!

this needs another chapter ASAP.

You really are one very good writer.

All of you stories have been excellent. I just hope you can find the time to continue them. I'll be very disapointed if you don't, as I'm sure will many others.

Looking forward to the next instalment !

Rapier

I like this stroy he need his mom and sisters. I don't want the dad to get the daughter it well not be a good story if that happen.

Well written, well executed. I've been waiting for someone to write a brilliant erotic story about hidden cameras and family members. I hope you consider similar themes in the future. Thank you so much for this wonderful read.

Well sustained eroticism, nice twist to get back into sisters' good graces and well deserving of a sequel!

It would be great if there was a follow up, or series! This is the good stuff.

Wonderful story and I do hope this will continue very soon

Dude, it's been almost five months since you published this story. It's gotten a 4.8 out of 5 stars voting score and almost every one of the over 40 reviews have asked/pleaded/begged for at least one more followup chapter. Please listen to your fans and give us what we want!! It's obvious that Colleen is hot for Daniel and so isn't the mom! And dad seems ok with mom getting a piece of ass in-house so put us out of our misery! lol

I just loved this story. Fabulous writing and imagery.

Can't wait to read the next parts.

Please go on. Waiting for another parts of this story.

I agree with HardBen and Hawk007 MORE.

You managed to get me to like your protagonist even though he is a perv I should dislike. Strange one this, but I have to say it was very erotic and I look forward to the next chapter.

That was intense!

HEY, AMAZING! I started reading on this site in 2010. I'm still hesitant/anxious/terrified to start writing my own stories, which I decided to do back in March 2018, but still to this day, nada.

This story is the best erotica I've ever read, only a couple of other's I can recall might cum close.

Also, no matter how good a story I've read in the past nine years, I've always owned the disposition that once I started writing my own erotica that after a bit of time I could write parallel, as good, as any author I've come across.

This is the first time I don't feel that bravado, I don't feel I could cum close to your level of penmanship...

... Anyways THANK YOU for the excellent Yarn!!!

....you CANNOT stop now.

😁🤟🏻

Awesomeness - pure joy to read.

Please continue.

Be sure to read "Out of the Attic" next as it the continuation of this story before you read the 3 part series "One More from the Attic Pt. 01 -03" which is a continuation of the series. This is a great love/incest/taboo series but needs to be read in the proper order to really enjoy it.

A good story, but who were Beth and heather, both mentioned in page 3 of your literotica story but never mentioned again? perhaps you need a better editor.

Beautiful. And very well thought out .straight on to continuation.

What can I say other than "Outstanding". This pressed all the right buttons and added to the fact it was well-written with excellent pacing, just makes it one of my all-time favorites.

excellent. hope Daniel gets both sisters and Mom before he finds out they set him up

Loved the series and looking forward to more chapters.

I enjoy the holes in the attic and the camera action.

Can't wait fir the next chapter.

Fun and games, an interesting read.

Would love to read more to see how it goes. Bet he gets all 3 of them and bet mom loves it and maybe dad and him can dble team mom and maybe sisters.

What gonna happen to to other sister and mom

Love it, love it, can't wait for Colleen and Mom's turn. Please make it soon.

Great writing.

My only quibble is that it seemed to come to a very abrupt end. It was a wonderfully paced story right up the the finale, with them teasing each other, and building up the sexual tension. Then it just ended. It was like; "And then the fucked. The end."

WOW! What a story!

The one thing I didn't care for was mom bald...was hoping for a proper adult woman's full muffin-she is after all a mature busy professional woman, not a teen anymore... Hope the only one with bush-?

And parents hyper-sexed ...2-3 times a week , after being married 20-some years?! Really-?!

And lucky dad gets to roger her rump, while she screams Daniel's name? Kinky!

And Hope's already told him she wants him to bugger her ass.

Really looking forward to next chapter.

Well done…excellent build up!

Excellent story. I hope there are many more chapters on the way

Fantastic story.

There's a serious problem with this story. Wiring the cameras into the electrical boxes requires detailed knowledge of house wiring. Even with that knowledge it is dangerous with the power on and people would definitely notice the power being switched off in various places as the connections are made.