All Comments on 'Investment'

simply beautiful

I loved this. The pace was slow, because it should be. I enjoyed the clear window into her thoughts and attitudes, and her perception of her brother as the kind of man that she needed. I look forward to reading the follow up stories.

ok but would have been better if she was still a virgin i hate stories where a girl loses her virginity to an asshole that doesn't care about her and doesn't satisfy her only himself

i almost cried when i read it

you gave such clear thought and preception

This was a beautiful story of true love that happened to be between a brother and sister. It makes me wish I had a younger sister. I'd like to think I would have been as gentle.

told with expert skill and a quality of love and devotion. how I wish I too had a lover like this. Could have been a little more descriptive but other then that full marks all the way. Please keep it cumming..

Thanks for a beautiful and tender little love story.

Osiyo, Brother... I am in awe of your talents as a writer... A 5 is nowhere near a high enough mark, I wish I could give it one much, much, higher... This is one of the most tender, loving, stories that I have ever read on this site, or any other for that matter... I sincerly hope that you are a professional writer, for if you are not, you have seriously missed your calling in life... Mitakuye Oyasin...

If I have to skip thorgh to the end and fight not to sleep through it, it is not worth reading the other part of the series

This was truly a beautiful story. Everyone scene you could picture their love for one another. It was not vulgar and that made this story all the more sensual. Thank you writing and I will be reading the continuation of this siblings love.

Sorry 'Ushergal' I for one found it captivating.

Our author somehow manages to portray the slow sensual feelings of genuine love rather than the so common 'ram. bam' etc.

WFEATHER I salute you.

Too much of her POV and not enough of his. Too Flowery , it does not have to be crude to be passionate and intense. That definitely did not get my heart rate up.

I agree, beautiful!

Both stories are beautiful. Great writing, great characters. We want more!!! Can't wait to get my hands on the sequel to this "Fated" but want to see more of SSF & "Return to the Cabinettes". These couples are so beautiful. Thanks to you, of course. :-)

older than me (I)

talking amongst themselves (between)

compare a sofa to a sleeping bag was like trying to compare a paper airplane to a boulder (I DON’T SEE THE VALUE OF THIS COMPARISON!!!! UNCLEAR, CONFUSING AND POORLY EXPRESSED!!!!)

(-a) modest panty (panties)

laying upon him (lying) (on)

out relationship (our)

Again! I pleased (pleaded)

drink me (in) visually

paused to (take) off

Noon (noon)

I liked the story. Simple, loving. Good tease.

What a beautiful story!! I love how you progressed it, as it unfolded I felt the characters ... I hope there is more of them to come ~ like when they re-unite or perhaps some of their adventures as they explore their sexuality!! Thank you Sir!! :)

nice start. Onto the next part.

A very tender read. Is there a chapter 2? Will there be a chapter 2? 5 stars

To any who want it to continue, it does in his series 'Fated'

Love it! Well written and a slow burn erotic tale. Most enjoyable on so many levels.

I think what I so love about your stories is that I begin to feel for your characters. I feel like I know them as if they were in my life and I experience the colorful sexual innuendoes with the characters that you portray

This was a fabulous start to the "Fated" series! Keep up the great work!