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All Comments on 'Invisible Girl - An Erotic Romance Pt. 09'

by zenmackie

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dogged1dogged1over 1 year ago

I had to reread the setup to the after-hours bookstore scene. I got the actions of the two girls mixed up at times. Having Chrissy refer to herself as "Jane" added to the confusion. I'm still enjoying the story.

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