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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Storyline Review

Good storyline; however, I was left with the feeling that there should have been more. It would be interesting to read about the two caracter's lives together and how they overcome the problems they will face. I would like to find out how their mixed-species child will look like. I normally don't like sci-fi anything, but this story definitly has potential. Keep on writing!

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