All Comments on 'Iron Rain Pt. 04'

So he will soon have Petra all to himself?

She's more woman than only one man could ever please, and he might need help, especially if he is going to pleasure his step sister too.

OH man, to be in his situation!

Thanks for the good read

Love the way this tale is progressing and admire your writing talent. Can't wait for next chapter . You are an amazing author. Thanks for sharing your work with us.

I really believe this could work as a novel. If you keep it going and flesh it out I'm positive it could sell.

So far you've devoted four chapters to some great sexual romps but only part of Chapter Two the 'tattoo', 'Olga Petranova', and an organization called 'Iron Rain'. I'm an afficiondo of a good thriller so if you can balance the two aspects of the story, you have my attention absolutely.

Very slowly but can wait a while to see what happens.

I want to tell you it's an awesome story thus far and you are a talented writer but one thing you need to figure out is the proper usage of the words 'passed' and 'past' because you keep flubbing it...

Otherwise excellent work.