All Comments on 'Iron Rain Pt. 16'

I just love this story, keep it going.

This series never ceases to amaze me...your style, intrigue, mystery...from the humble beginnings of a Military Academy to Eternal Master...I really don't want to see this end...this series would make for a wonderful movie series!

I can't even begin to say how much i have enjoyed this story . I am begging you to please not end it soon . Thanks for a awesome story .

drug er i mean iron rain addict... my new title... was incredibly disappointing at the end of the chapter...

why?

BECAUSE I wanted... needed... no CRAVE more of this wonderful story... the mind has incredible powers and I feel an unending pain in my stomach (no, its not gas) because the next chapter isnt out yet...

Just with all of the characters that the author has created in this story is an enormous task, and keeping the storyline fresh and exciting is an unbelievable amount of work.

Creatively written and super erotic is what comes to my mind first, when I try to describe the story.

I'll be a bit sad when the end of this fabulous tale finally gets here, because I won't have any looking forward to read the next chapter.

Thank you very much for the great chaper

Amazing story.. I wonder what happened to William? Was he also an 'avatar' of the Eternal Master?

Is it really OVER? Don't tell that it is...............please let there be some more! In anticipation, I bow to your fortitude and mental strength in conceptualizing, creating and rendering this epic story in the form of a SAGA! Steven Spielberg should use it to make a new movie.

Must It End Now, So many loose ends!.

ED

Why does it have to end? I still think you should write it as a noval for print. And give more discription of the other races that he met in his search for the master. Is there a reason that you won't consider a book form of this story.

This was an excellent read but the end seems to be "I am tired of this story line; I'm going to just get it over with". It's almost like we've finished the first book of the story and are waiting for book 2. Hopefully, sometime in the future, you can revisit this. In the meantime, thank you for this.

Incredibly complicated. I'm not jumping ahead to see but hope it all works out right. Otherwise an amazing ride so far.

Hey! Imagine that 🤗 ... I didn't get confused and enjoy following right along.