All Comments on 'Iron Rain Pt. 17'

Wow this is turning if at all possible more epic than it already was. Keep up the fantastic writing.

better and better great story.

I miss Kat. Please bring her back.

epic,

more please

I can not believe you ended this chapter the way you did and left us hanging . What a tease . Please with all your power get the next chapter out as soon as possible . Thank you for a awesome chapter and story .

It was just meant to be, for Akira to be Nick's wife, but if Bennu is his wife I hope that she will share him with Akira.

As for the story; It's hard to describe, but 'Fantastic' seems to be a good adjective to use.

As I was reading I had a thought, "I'm certainly glad that I don't have the author's nightmares." Wouldn't that be a kick ass night.

As again, thanks for the great chapter.

I hate waiting! Please get the next chapter out as quick as possible. And PLEASE don't let this Bennu chick be the only wife. That would suck.

More is all we ask for. Pwease :3

I have been reading this story off and on for a while and while i started reading for the sex, I stayed and have actually been more interested in the story you are telling. This is the first story from this site, especially this category, that I have felt compelled to share at some point with my friends.

Loving this story, the storyline is brilliant.