All Comments on 'Iron Rose Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
SO IT BEGINS

FINALLY MIGUEL WILL HAVE REVENGE I CANT WAIT. I'm jumping for joy like a maniac right now.

AKA983AKA983about 5 years ago
Iron Rose

Finaly Miguel to get what he wants for all waiting

Thankyou Vanalas

aquafireaquafireabout 5 years ago

This is great. I can't wait for the bomb that Miguel will drop.

Gabriel being sad and remembering Angelo is so unbelievable. Wow. I hope he develops something with Miguel then he and Jack can go to hell.

And for Christian, all I know was I am pissed at him one moment but the next I sympathize him. I mean I can imagine how hard it is to choose between your family and the love of your life. But I can't also help but feel bad for Miguel. I want Chriguel to be back so bad. I am disappointed with Christian but I can't blame him from the pressure he's been. And the kiss in the office and in the party was so hot. I missed that and their love making too.

Poor Carter but I still hate him though. He's a twat.

I know you said you're back at school but don't take too long to update van. And also DH, it is so fucking killing me. That story is going somewhere.

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
NOW WE ARE GOING SOME WHERE HMMMMMMMMN BUT I CANT HELP BUT BE MAD AT CHRIS AND SYMPATHETIC AT gab-fucking-riel

I just can't believe I have been checking day to day thru Vanalas' outline of stories with out seeing iron rose infact,on Tuesday I re-read Unbroken chapter 18 but still with out noticing iron rose till today fuck as avanaholic am ashamed And jealousy that u read it first man...am embarrassed coz 12 fucking days have passed with me not realizing t.That hurts

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
Vanalas can u plz let Chris stop this foolishness and go back to Miguel or else am hating him that I'l not stand him just lyk gabriel man what he does makes me freak out...fuck the guy z so annoying to the last extent and to sum it up he has to suffer to

Bad I wanted him to be jealousy or even be smacked by Angelo but hmmmmmm I kyked it any and fuck the party was mwaaààaaaaà I lyked it lyk hell every part of t.....the way we stole the spotlight hmmmmm man I want attention as fuck and hey did Angelo just flirt with Jason??????

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago
HEHEHE WHY Z gabriel sad hmmmmmmmmmm,why??????

I thought every thing they was happening is pleasure to him,well not every on earth z so keen some are just un noticing,now what????? Does he want us to say he z now regretting hmmmm and am sure that he keeps Alicia home just to remember Angelo hehehe that fool will regret,he fucking killed Angel but now he's depressive hmmmmmmm lyk has much in store 4 u moron just wait and see,oh poor Alicia am happy she's going to see Angelo again and so t begins.....u know what I was mad Chris chose carter but happy that his attention at the party was solely on Miguel hahahaha

Am not going to comment about carter uhh uhhh,I just can't stand him and let him be dipped in atoilet

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 5 years ago

The long wait has finally came to an end,Angel z back in his mansion now Jack hehehehehehehe wait and watch u fucked up dude huhuhu that ugly couple HAS TO PAY

.....Theme song bitch better have ma money by riri and ts to late to apologize be Tim*****d

Am waiting for chapter 2 and 9 of destined lovers and am sorry van for not......God just forgive me my king am ashamed now

Chancem77Chancem77about 5 years ago
Can't wait for the next chapter

loving the story so much. Great job.

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 4 years ago
Ok am waiting

I am waiting patiently for the new story. It is good but let it end up being great okay

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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It had been so long I read wild flower. Am mostly trying hard to remember... I'll have to read again to catch up I guess... cant wait to see how sweet his revenge will be.... hey vanalas please talk about yourself too... I would love to know you. Or even better hire me to be your proofreader, I'll be honored.

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