All Comments on 'Irony of Brandy Ch. 01'

I liked the interesting setup. Nice twist. Overall, you also have a good pace to the action and a realistic tone and description of things as they would likely be. Nice effort!!

I really liked this one alot. It was very evocative and I enjoyed it thoroughly.

Looking forward to many more descriptions of your encounters with Kenny's wife.

Hope you get her pregnant of course.- You do want to totally cuckold Kenny don't you. Give him a lovechild from his wife's cheating to raise.

Great story. It makes me want to go to Wal-Mart and get a job :-) keep up the good work!!!