All Comments on 'Irresistible Attraction'

by LimeyLady

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Turns a bit to fast to be realistic or believable but it was hot. Just wish it wasn't rushed

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 5 years ago
not bad

I was wondering how Lorna had seen Hev, even though the go to the same school never would have guessed it was in the same store that was being robbed, and how could Matt turned out to be such a wimp if he was as big as you said he was, also not as long as your usual stories, can't wait to read more wither Hev is in it or not

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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I did aim for a shorter, pacier story than usual (after previously being accused of writing quite long tales). Next time I'll go for somewhere in the middle!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fast but not rushed

Your trip from straight to bi curious was maybe a little fast, but that is sometimes life.

this story was well written and kept my attention from start to intermission.

At least i hope it was an intermission and there is more to come(pun interned).

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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Thanks as always for taking time to comment. I did deliberately make it shorter than usual and admit the transition from straight seems very fast. There again, Lorna is obviously very impulsive . . . and there's nothing wrong with that in a girl!

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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I'm glad you read it as fast rather than rushed. And yes, more will follow soon.

YourLinkYourLinkover 5 years ago
Engaging as usual!

I enjoy your longer tales too. I'd like to hear more about Lorna once she's introduced to the lesbian corner. lol

RastanuraRastanuraover 5 years ago
?

Didn't I see this from Hev's side? I seem to remember it.

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 5 years ago
Very Good

I believe we need to know where Lorna and Heather end up. Please write the sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A bit fast

It seemed a bit rushed yeah. That speedy transformation from straight to bi (though the bi came off like more lesbian) was too rushed and similar to the other hundred attempts by others. It was certainly of less quality compared to your other work but it still stands above many other stories. Very hot still so no worries, just not great

metroalmametroalmaover 5 years ago
Change of view. Nice

to see the same story from two angles. Lorna do not jump in too fast really. Given the intensity of the events Lorna could be riding a wave from which she may come down, or she could be on a new journey. Hormones kick in and have a life of their own sometimes. It doesn't make the sex any less fantastic. It is all part of the journey. (and who doesn't enjoy a little "travel" now and then :) )

Just when I thought I was getting tired of the escapades of ladies from the Lesbian Corner . . .

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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Worry not; Lorna will indeed get introduced to Lesbians' Corner.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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You did see the first chapter or so from Heather's side. This is meant to be a "what happened next" from Lorna's side, with Lorna completely unaware of Heather's recent night with the policewoman.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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A Lorna/Heather sequel will follow soon.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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The sequel will, I promise, be longer and less "rushed". I'm afraid it's too late to slow down Lorna's leap from straight to lesbian (I don't think I used the word "bi" and suspect she has little immediate use for men at the time being!). I will, however, give her more pause for thought.

LimeyLadyLimeyLadyover 5 years agoAuthor
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Thank you for your insight and kind words. Power to the girls from The Corner!

Only_connectOnly_connectover 2 years ago

Oh Limey, this one's fun, and sexy, and wittily written as always. A joy!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Yet another great tale.

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