by LimeyLady
Turns a bit to fast to be realistic or believable but it was hot. Just wish it wasn't rushed
I was wondering how Lorna had seen Hev, even though the go to the same school never would have guessed it was in the same store that was being robbed, and how could Matt turned out to be such a wimp if he was as big as you said he was, also not as long as your usual stories, can't wait to read more wither Hev is in it or not
I did aim for a shorter, pacier story than usual (after previously being accused of writing quite long tales). Next time I'll go for somewhere in the middle!
Your trip from straight to bi curious was maybe a little fast, but that is sometimes life.
this story was well written and kept my attention from start to intermission.
At least i hope it was an intermission and there is more to come(pun interned).
Thanks as always for taking time to comment. I did deliberately make it shorter than usual and admit the transition from straight seems very fast. There again, Lorna is obviously very impulsive . . . and there's nothing wrong with that in a girl!
I'm glad you read it as fast rather than rushed. And yes, more will follow soon.
I enjoy your longer tales too. I'd like to hear more about Lorna once she's introduced to the lesbian corner. lol
I believe we need to know where Lorna and Heather end up. Please write the sequel.
It seemed a bit rushed yeah. That speedy transformation from straight to bi (though the bi came off like more lesbian) was too rushed and similar to the other hundred attempts by others. It was certainly of less quality compared to your other work but it still stands above many other stories. Very hot still so no worries, just not great
to see the same story from two angles. Lorna do not jump in too fast really. Given the intensity of the events Lorna could be riding a wave from which she may come down, or she could be on a new journey. Hormones kick in and have a life of their own sometimes. It doesn't make the sex any less fantastic. It is all part of the journey. (and who doesn't enjoy a little "travel" now and then :) )
Just when I thought I was getting tired of the escapades of ladies from the Lesbian Corner . . .
Worry not; Lorna will indeed get introduced to Lesbians' Corner.
You did see the first chapter or so from Heather's side. This is meant to be a "what happened next" from Lorna's side, with Lorna completely unaware of Heather's recent night with the policewoman.
The sequel will, I promise, be longer and less "rushed". I'm afraid it's too late to slow down Lorna's leap from straight to lesbian (I don't think I used the word "bi" and suspect she has little immediate use for men at the time being!). I will, however, give her more pause for thought.
Thank you for your insight and kind words. Power to the girls from The Corner!
Oh Limey, this one's fun, and sexy, and wittily written as always. A joy!