by Lynn_Elliot
Very interesting story. I would like to see it develop further.
not read it, I going to the bathroom to flush out my eyes
at least you don't have a working cock to worry about not getting hard, for those of us with operational gear it was just a waste of time since it didn't have much eroticism, keep trying
Writing is forced and confusing. Character motivation is unbelievable. Nice attempt, but no cigar this time.
An interesting Non-Human story, but the herd-mentality of what seems to be a horse-like society has only limited equivalence to a very weak-tribal human society.
Unrated, because it is VERY poorly categorized!
gosh... i am feeling weird
this is my first gay cock story
read it thrice and wanked.....AM I GAY