All Comments on 'It Doesn't Count'

...but this story was both incredibly erotic and realistic.

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I typically don't enjoy many incest stories because they aren't realistic. Maybe it's just me, but I wouldn't think that it would be so easy to just hop into bed with a brother or sister like it's a one-night stand, regardless of how hot they are. But your story perfectly captured the torment and conflict -- their mutual feelings of attraction versus the taboo of their situation.

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They didn't completely give in at the end, but it was no less erotic because of it -- probably more so.

And now air fucking--that was HOT

A good enough story,most brothers have had some sort of sex with their sisters,especially if there is not much age difference.Anyone who knows anything at all about psychology will understand this.The feeling is ,"how dare another woman or man as the case maybe take my brother or sister away from me."It lasts forever,regardless of marriages ,especially where there is just the two of them.

that was hot!

I hope that there is a sequel where he fucks the shit right out of her !

I only regret you didnt let them get together. I hope you do in a second chapter.

Seriously. This is damned good writing. You did a great jaw capturing the taboo, which is what makes an incest story good. I feel like they're not done. Like there's more story to tell. It's the characters. They're really good. I think they have staying power, and I think you should keep going.

I have to counter those who are demanding sequels; this story stands on its own particularly well. My opinion is that a sequel would necessarily be lacking many of the elements that added to the excitement of this story. Given that Amy's already "bent" her rules so much, they would have to shatter with another temptation quite the same. Better left to the imagination, methinks.

Very evocative story, great supporting details, and quite a wonderful build-up.

WoW! Beautifully crafted story with just enough to say in the words of a President "I did not have sex with that woman" :)

Actually I found this a lot more erotic that if there had been sex.

Venus

Very original I think. The "no touch"... I liked that.

Great story. A little too teasing. I would have had them finally break the barrier and one of them almost struggle against it but love it and then make them deal with the consequences. But a unique, interesting, sexy and frustrating story. Almost makes me want to sit down and start writing my own stories again. Literotica at it's best. Keep writing. IMHO no human beings alive could have kept from fucking in that situation while being that turn on. But that helped make the story unique but oh so frustrating. I will definitely keep my eye out for more of your stories.

Yourawful (my username not this touching story)

what kind of pussy whipped ass is he no real guy would put up with that shit he would tell her either we do it for real or we stay away from each other forever your choice. keep it sounding believable

Keep it coming.

That was purely Tantric sex - what a hot story - I dont think that it needs a sequel - Let anyone who wants them to get together read another story - This is one of the best one-of stories I have read - I felt everything that was/wasn't done - so sexy - regards - Jena121

That was so hot! I'm a woman and I wanted to shove a throbbing cock in her face!

So thats why all my older sisters got me to help them dress when they went out! Wish I knew it then.

Awesome and well written. Liked it very much. A sequel would be nice...

Seriously intense, refreshingly different to everything i've read on here before. I look forward to reading the others.

Well written and seriously sexy. I would love to see more in this line.

This story is an example of erotica at it's best. A real delight to read. Thanks Rob.

I really liked this story alot....

I thought I was mean for the cliffhangers I leave, but this author takes torment to a whole new level

Interesting and unique plot. Dialogue and descriptive passages well above average. All in all, a well written piece of erotica. Kudos.

WOW.

i loved this story. it was the most sensual thing i ever read. amazzing.

This was one of the most delightful stories I have read anywhere, and it made me hope that one of them would inadvertently sneeze and break the rules.

You truely captured the essence of erotica in this piece, the forbidden being there just out of reach. Waiting for something more to happen yet it never does, congradulations on an excellent job :). I look forward to reading the other pieces in this series.

Left me a total train wreck. I loved it while wanting more to happen and the pretense to go away. Really wish they had completed there love act. Would love to see them live there lives out together. Thanks for a wonderful story.

I deleted this comment, but I just thought everyone should still see the kind of crap we authors have to put up with...

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what guy would ever put up with that much teaseing he would leave and never talk to her again keep it atleast sounding realistic please] ---- Rob m'Dear

What a unique and creative story! It's different - I like it. I hope this was just the beginning and there's more to come...

Your three part story here was amazingly crafted. I applaud your work! This is the second time i've read it and the whole way through i was getting more and more frustrated and then the end

You are an excellent writer. I love the approach you took to tease out the story. I will be sure to read the rest of your stuff. A+

You sir have a gift !!

Wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!

You deff have a gift! One of my favorites!!! :)

this story is possibly the best one i've ever read, the fact that you ended it without them ever really touching was amazing, and really, allows the reader to understand the taboos, and forbibbeness or the experience...

Ok... now the sequel, where she's squatting over his hard on, teasing him with her hot juicy pussy and gets so excited that she gets dizzy, loses her balance and impales herself on it just as he blows his entire load into her. Game's over so they might as well get on with what they really want from their love life... move in together and spend their nights doing all kinds of serious loving, licking, sucking and fucking.

I found myself holding my breath, almost as though I was there experiencing everything.

Paperfly

This is what erotica is all about! Great concept, fantastic story well written. Some of the best stories don't go all the way, this is a great example. The essence of a taboo relationship is reluctance to go too far, loved the way they both were tempted and both resisted.

fantastic story, well written and perfectly paced. Unique and beautiful. I'll be reading the next ones immediately.

Needed to. Have actual sex towards the. End

Just so sensual. Congrats.

That was so unbelievably erotic.

so I almost gave it five stars. They came so close to having sex... Air fuck, is that what it's called? Pretty hot, even if they didn't do it.

Although this story had no sex to speak off it kept me very interested.It was well written and quite good to read.Literoti a could use more stories of this caliber.I loved it and I hope there will be more chapters to come from it.Thank you to the person or persons who wrote it,Well done.

HOT. AS. FUCK.

Enough said.

A big tease!

Damn that was hot!!!!

But I didn't care for them bith being left hanging like that. They really needed to give in during this chapter.

i normally write long comments, but this needs two words “Frustratingly weird”!!.

For not touchingwas the condition. So in evening he brought she cana body hugging dress with a hole between the legs. He can put a condome (even if he is fully nude) and the action takes place without skin to skin touch any where