All Comments on 'It Had To Be Magic Ch. 01'

When do we get part 2. I want to see what happens next.

Looking forward to part 2

Looking forward to part 2... with keen interest..Good work!

Great story so far. Lots of typos though. Looking forward to parts 2 & 3!

That was a great story and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter as soon as I write this comment. Thanks for your time and effort.

Don't know if U still look at this...but I actually wanted 5 Five Stars...wish U wojldkeep writing!!☺

The title says it all

too wonderful

Great touch using a magician as the basis of a story and the escapology side is very neat. Looking forward to the next chapter. 5 stars

Fantastic character build-out - and a relationship that has a lot of depth to it. Hot writing - I came like a geyser reading this.

Wow, great story. Not usually a BDSM guy but... H O T...

Thanks for sharing this.

I love being spanked, this was a very good story, can't wait to till I read more.

Really hot; I guess you mean "shudder" when you say "shutter"?

"Teddy has always been my pet name for me ever since I was a baby. "

It should be "her pet name".

"I was really started to lose my patience."

It should be "starting" or "I really started to lose my patience."

How do you have an editor, but they fail to catch so many mistakes? Really blaring mistakes...

I'm not into BDSM, but this is a HOT story so far. If was in the brother's shoes I'd be at the end of my rope with a sister like this, I could never do the things she craves.

It’s amazing the secrets some people keep from everyone but a select one or two, excluding others with the same secrets and desires. Fantastic

Drug/dragged lol wtf .. did you edit this yourself? Did you go to school? 😂

I have recently taken on a policy of automatically down voting any stories that have genres mixed in with the brother/sister incest that disgust me unless there's a ⚠️ TRIGGER WARNING ⚠️ placed in a preface before the story starts. I enjoy male dom/female sub, but that is as far as my tolerance for most BDSM goes.

Next time, be considerate of your readers tastes and incorporate a list of triggers in your opening statements. The tag search DOES NOT work in reverse order to weed out unwanted suggestions. 1/5

None of the following tags attached to this story's chapter ⚠️TRIGGERED⚠️ the brain of @ScottishTexan that it probably goes beyond hirs/it's "I enjoy male dom/female sub, but that is as far as my tolerance for most BDSM goes" statement:

bondage

spanking

magic

tied

brother

piercing

sister

snowball

siblings

deep throat

I wonder if the author regrets not tailoring the tags for the readers that don't posses the powers of deductive interpretation, let alone it's mystical reasoning, when she shared it here some eight(8) years ago. How much more of an inconsiderate, unacceptable, close-minded, knuckle-dragging, and mouth-breathing author could she be without becoming detached from reality⁉️‼️‼️

Lots of typos but still a super hot story!