All Comments on 'It Happened At The Lake'

the pace, the character, the details, the action - loved it. thanks!!

i cant wait for the rest

I hope you will complete this soon. It is criminal to keep people dangling!! LOL

I think you mean "jiggling".

I noticed several points where some words were missing from the sentence. Usually things like "we had _ drink" but also some more significant instances.

Also thought you could have gone into more detail (despite that the other commenter likes the detail), pretty much through out the story, though it would have been a lot longer then.

Other than that, i liked the scenarios as they developed and if the sex scenes were elaborated a bit it would have been great.

Sorry I really don't like your stories and that's ok You know NOTHING about love which I prefer. Sorry you have never had Love in your life.

After this long build up of getting to his Mom (for the first time) , and your description is "We had sex right there on the mat", and that's it? I couldn't read anymore. Not even that much description when he was with his Aunt. It was always "we made love" "we made love". Sorry I can't do it. Oh, and why the fuck would she go swimming in a dirty ass lake in a dress, much less a new one. There is a lot more I want to say, but I will let it go.

So IMMATURE they think(?) that drugs are a essential part of life. Reading the FIRST(?) reference was more than sufficient to close the window. Unfortunately, 1 was the lowest rating available.

Almost like you don't know the word "the" and so many other mistakes like English is not your first language. Where are you from and what is your basic language?

More, I want to know how things turned out after they all got together... Did Kim get pregnant and have her cousins baby? Bid her son get her and her sister pregnant ????

I wish I could have had an open family and been able to play with them...