All Comments on 'It Has to be Fate Pt. 02'

you have me on the edge of my seat to find out everything that happens. i appreciate your descriptions of the places they have been and are mentioned as i have been to all of them except Japan. i can hardly wait for the next chapter!

You did it again. Very well done, and I loved the references to the TV shows.

and very well executed. Thanks.

This story has all the characters from E&E and other of his stories .but you should have someone check your editing, ( huge. A Marine Colonel who was renting the place greeted them and assured Mica that everything was in excellent condition.)

You said the man was a colonel one time then he was a major later.

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga

1. Wrong category; should be in Romance not LW.

2. Was like reading about Barbie & Ken.

3. They both had fragile personalities, jealous over little details.

4. I found it a hard read, while some sex is OK it shouldn't be most pages.

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Oh that poor woman and baby. Someone needs to tell her that message as well.

Amazing insider awareness. Hard to remember technological evolution is rife with blood and guts. Its not so simple as a 2 hour 'Top Gun' film.