All Comments on 'It Just Could Not Be!'

she jerks him off in hotel room.. But wont date him...

then when she knows about his reaction to his first wife's lying deceit and massive betrayal... this wife decides .....

yeah Its better If I lie to him ???

um......okaaaaayyyyy I guess for some.

I've read 24 of your stories. The best are "Guilt" and "One Hundred and Fifty-Five Miles" This seems more like a story fragment.

She was not a hell of a lot better than wifey number one. Where is PAPATOAD when we need him?

A very different story line. "Thank You" for something different!!!!

Dufferent, and yet oddly enjoyable.

It's good to have a hot sexy wife but this? She says she doesn't do it to pick up men. But If she lied once who says she isn't telling lies now?

Personally, I wouldn't bet my future on her.

and a good twist on the cheating wife theme. I'll overlook the POW details.

Well thought out and developed. But if it were up to me, I would ask for a divorce immediately. These things grow with time and there is always another level to go to. She may not want to make the big step, but a lot a little steps will get her there.

This does not mean that I did not give you five stars!

I like it when reactions swing radically from outrage to enjoyment. Some will see a man here that makes the attempt at going with the flow, some will see a wimp, some will see a dangerous man only mildly in control.

Some would see the female as one who should be cast aside for the obvious, some see her as accepting of herself finally, and everything in between.

I always try to be different, to inject a slice of life. I concede I do not always succeed.

Now can Mark actually accept Kathy's powerful urges? Perhaps? Yet the jealousy has already reared it's head once before.

I did not offer that answer, the reader must decide. So this brief draft of a much longer piece is voted smack in the middle, perfect. Thus hated or enjoyed, nothing much in between. Perfect. It appears I did my job..LOL.

MGM

This was an odd story , I didnt particularly like it or dislike it , it was just odd . Some of your other stories have been better .

It's your story so you can tell it however you want, but the problem I have is this, your main character was defined as a killing machine. He was highly jealous and didn't like for other men to put their hands on his wife.

That's how you defined him.

Then you have him meet Kathy. He swings from hating women to willing to drink her bath water if she ask.

Ok, another shift.

Then you go a step further and while she's playing games to get his attention he can't wait to suck it up, something his character didn't seem to be willing to put up with from his first wife, but later when we find out she likes to "expose" herself because it turns her on, he can't wait to also experience that with her.

See he's not consistent.

Oh well, just noticed that, not saying it was good or bad, just not a consistent character or someone that I personally liked. But again I'm not here to tell you what or how to right, just to point out I don't see it the way you suggested as extremes.

-Risq

Sure there were inconsistencies, but still a great read...

Lame. Good mechanics - spelling etc..

This was one of the more unusual stories on this site. It feels like a cheating wife story, but it doesn't appear to be. You're left with some doubts about the wife's honesty, but she might be telling the truth. And the husband is an explosion waiting to happen. But there are people - women who are turned on by exhibiting themselves and that in and of itself doesn't mean there will be more to follow. But I doubt that it will end there. You said this was part of a longer piece. I just have the feeling that this would be one of the sad ones.

the guy thumps the crap out of people that do him wrong . If it happened to him again it would probably push him over the edge and the people would be dead . not that thats a bad thing lol .

for them to play especially given the predators out there. Once she comes to the attention of one of those predators no public place would be safe. It also sounds like she will play her games even if he says no or try to restrict them. She also seem to get off on putting him into defending "her honor" situations (since guys will try to hit on her). The fact that she will cum due to his reaction to her antics further encourages more and more risktaking. No good can come from this teasing hobby/compulsion.

You did well! Creating a new look at the "is she?" question is an accomplishment! I liked how you did the entire plot line. I'm sure if I were a nit picker I could have found a nit or two... but I not into that. I'm into was the story a good read, did i enjoy it and did it flow well. This one did all three.

Thank you.

The parking garage didn't seem particularly public to me. So, does she like her danger or is she unaware?? Just a thought.

I liked the story, but was surprised that Jasmine got off so easy. No retribution. The fact she got half with him doing nothing did not fit the anger. I might have expected a message to be passed quietly through the lawyer that it would be in her best interest to leave with nothing but her possessions.

RC

NO and no!

After reading this story I realized that this author is one of the very few most excellent writers on this site. Obviously I missed so much by ignoring this author. No more!

Very competently and wonderfully written story. Thank you.

Not much info about husband's violent personality, first wife's promiscuity, second wife's motivation (mental illness, really?!)

Lucky guy!

The only risk, one time he isn't close by and some neanderthal grabs her, ducks into a parking structure and rapes her.

Otherwise, sexy, happy, horny couple. I liked it.

but you did good about representing it and his insecuritiies and how they work it out. well written 5.

And there is nothing in the story to contradict that -

She might actually be able to hold the line on the thrills and not need to escalate into dangerous territory -

Nicely done - lots of questions and thought provoking -

a wonderful thing to watch a beautiful sexy woman strut her stuff and be proud she is your and only your woman

but to others its exhilarating. TK U MLJ LV NV

A loving married couple living out her fantasy together. No cheating, no betrayal and no want for anyone else. Priceless.

Maybe the accompanying entertainment ...

lmao!!!

Married to a violent psycho.

Thank you magmaman. 5***** .

'roscovich'

This was a nailbiter to the end. Everybody has their thing I guess. Well communication would've save this poor husband some emotional pain.

a very dangerous game to play alone...I wonder - did she ever let guys fuck her?

Sounds like fun to go out with the wife flashing......mine often went out with no knickers and would flash her hairy beaver about for fun....then she started fucking around so got rid....a simple bit of fun turned nasty...but if it floats their boats and stays as fun...what the heck...enjoy it

But she is playing a very dangerous game, by doing what she is doing alone. A guy in a carpark could very easily bundle her into a car or van, it only takes seconds. They both need to work on their honesty, or it may lead to trouble.

The deceit is disturbing even though I can understand her concern. Still, it seems like one of those 'best confessed before marriage' kind of things.

If she's really being totally honest now and she's willing to only expose herself when he's with her, then it's likely to work out alright.

In the real world one should worry a bit more about that sort of thing. Most pleasure or excitement oriented behavior tends to escalate. Things become less exciting as they become more familiar or common. Looking for the thrill we used to get we take things a bit farther, until that too becomes familiar...

This behavior is so bizarre and likely to end in some kind of a confrontation that it is clear that it is a prelude to cheating, or rape. Either way, he should be concerned.

GoesGrunt has a good point, the "thrill" of risky behavior comes from adrenaline and like any drug adrenaline builds a tolerance requiring progressively more with time.

I like this one. HOWEVER, your story structure wasn't particularly good. You jumped from the problem, to Jasmine, to meeting her, to the lawyer, to hell, I don't know. The flow was not great.

If I were her husband, one of my questions would be 'if you could not say no to me because I excited you so much by showing off, what is to keep the same thing happening for some other man"?

And I think a mother complaining about 'that woman dressed like a whore' in a DEPARTMENT STORE...well...that would put the kibosh on that pretty quick.

not sure I am comfortable, but I don't have to be, he does.

Yes, she is excited and thrilled by exposing herself. No, she doesn't have to go another step further and establish physical contact. But, because she is happy just showing herself to others, doesn't mean the others will be content to only watch.

there are some out there who do not take kindly to what they may perceive to be "leading on" or "teasing". Some couple violence with forceful taking. It can be dangerous out there.

the bummer is, He Did. TK U MLJ LV NV

the women and men cheat! Still you keep on reading them You really are a brain dead asshole. Your wife tells me everyday how she so fucking happy away from your sorry ass. BTW a 5!! just to piss you off

Funny

I love it, she gets her jollies and he gets the "benefit" package ☺

What the fuck did I read, dumb is the word.

We are all different, whatever floats your boat but in a relationship openness and honesty is important. We have our likes and dislikes and providing it's not hurting anyone then what is the problem.

This story was interesting and inventive. Good job.

jtaylor

Just keep traveling and she will take this to the next level. After what he went through with the first wife, why would he put up with this?

On this story was really bad, it was all over the place, your time lines are always jumping around randomly with no rhyme or reason but this was worse than most.

that I have something against more back story then story. The story part is fine.

Some of the best sex in my life has come with men who took me on top of a washing machine. And not always with my BF/Fiance/Husband.

Kinda strange but i could like a woman like that.

I wouldn't believe a word she said. No one, except in a LW story, would tolerate that from a wife.

I have to agree with 26THNC

She will cheat

Of course. A woman who can't control her urges will end up cheating sooner or later.

She would have been raped or seduced by now. I've seen women like this though.

Yes waiting clears and focuses the mind, sadly i know that. What i am also makes it impossible to be in a close relationship due to two cheating ex-wives. I love the quiet of the forest, It calms the soul and keeps me from the desire for justice. You wrote a good story, short and well moving but he would never allow the 3rd to lie to him like that, never.

I found it to be a good story.

I did laugh at the anon misogynists who've never had a date with a real woman before tell us all how she will eventually behave. Thats always fun, laughing at the stupid folks is a cheap thrill but hey we all have our kinks.

2* hit

Great story.

A good story, I think you could have done a lot more with the "waiting is good" line but it might have become redundant. I'm no writer, just sharing my views. Perhaps a bit more description of the fights and his frustration. But these are my personal views and thoughts, I might be full of shit, I'm no writer after all.

3 stars. Never got beyond adolescent fantasy.

He turns out to be the usual ex Special Forces dude so all comers can be dealt with and she gets to play her games in safety because he can protect her whilst enjoying her exhibitionism.

Yeah right. Sooner or later she'll get attacked and he won't be quick enough to save her or find himself on the wrong end of a firearm. All the super soldier stuff is wasted against high velocity lead.

Good Loving Wife story 4*

Very good story and well presented. I don't understand having the husband be such a great fighter, only to not use him in some great finally.

Another good tale.