All Comments on 'It Started with a Kiss'

You always write the best Uncle Niece stories! Where do you get the inspiration?

Damn that was a good story not what thought at first but I am really glad I read this it was damn good have jen just take what she wanted damn good job.

When things are that good means you have inspiration from experience. Fucking your niece will do that.

I have a niece that looks like cameron diaz. Sure wish she would treat me like that.

“ Jen couldn't remember the last time she hadn't eaten this much food.”

You really need an editor who understands grammar & the English language.

This is poorly done throughout.

Perhaps with an editor & someone to mentor you you could improve. Your story does have potential, it’s just your lack of English that crippled it.

Bill S.