All Comments on 'It Stays in Chicago'

by MisterRi

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Fantastic debut!

Well done! Very sexy. Dialogue was perfect and action was incredible. A loving and hot story! Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

mom is my kind of slut, do a part 2

topleaseustopleaseusabout 5 years ago
Right on !!

Well fucking done man!Good story and i hoe you have more !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Delicious!

"Our first kiss was magical, it brought my arousal into new heights. When her tongue darted and met mine it sparked a fire in me that would be hard to put out."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Reprint/Remake

I've read this story before on this same site. This one has a slight change in the ending.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 5 years ago

Loved it!! Yes, you need to tell us what happened next!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great Story

more please.

chytownchytownabout 5 years ago
Hot Story****

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
everything was going good but he fucken killed the story when she asked what do you want to do to me ill do anything and he told her i want to fuck yoyr mouth killed it he should of sai i want to fuck that big ass of yours ram your asshole with my big co

it was a good story but you know the ultimate sin is fucking your mothers asshole its one thing to fuck her but to fuck her up the ass is the ultimate sin thats crossing the last line

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
WTF OH!! MAMA

What a dream come true. good story..........Thanks

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

Liked to story; however, there was no emotional development of the characters. I could not tell if the son really cared about his mother or simple considered her something to screw while waiting for the next flight. An 18 yearly old boy should have developed/displayed a little emotional maturity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Amazing story. 2nb part please.

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